deadly vision vs. killaconcepz
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Consider this kid merked.

This guy iz really confident huh?!

Get beat on while I add injuries of all kinds/
make ur spin intertwin till u bleed red whine!!//
Destroy ya bitch rhymes- U get killed in any form/
wit blounted horns. From a oxen. While u boxin inject u wit leathal toxins even afta da white flags thrown in!!//
I'll eradicate dis faggot at any date/leave u in a batterd state at a exesive rate I'll choke u so hard ur fam'll suffercate!!//
Ill kill u grim reverse ur grin smack u to a face spin/
Untill ur confedence as big as da man on da BIC pen!!//
Deadly Vison dont battle he babble /as my lyrics unravel ill stab u untill ur body layed on da gravel!!//
My attitude on point like knifes and swords/or a lion roar. Fuck blowin u off da "site" im bout to knock u over"board"!!//



FINISHER

speak the "truth", comming to yo head like "john booth"// as your temples pop out of your sides under tension, lyrical pension telepathy imploding your mind like a acid possesion, i dont want yo represention i know your definiton, act a high lord as i come out collapsing your vocal chords, and i leave u choking on your own blood and drooling on your microphone cord//



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Blah!! Streeeeeeeeeeeeeeetched...shit..lol

Reppin Connecticut, you're worthless, like a bitch wit no pussy or tits..
But the question today is, will ya name be known as G.A.Y? yes it fits..
lightweight I Could Pull Your Head Through Ya Ass And Watch You Walks..
I laugh at yo FINISHER, You Scream For Help,Guess You Can Say Your Butt-Talks..
Transexual & handicap from the shape of contorted figures from yo families misfits..
Bend this killa vertebrae into a triangle and play pool with all of ya spinal discs..
Like Chickinhead u ran ya mouth now I pull my gat And Ya Sent Str8 To Heavan…
Truth?I Looked At Ya Skill With U Droppin 3 Outta 10’s While Im Droppin Str8 11’s..
You A fucking waste of a good concept For example like puttin shit on my Tims…
We in Relaunch Know U a fag,cant walk tha walk Cuz u Str8 keep kickin ya Limbs..
With a name like that how Can he handle my wrath it gets Dense When I Rocket…
Faggot ass stop playin cuz u already got sonned like my dick u choked & sucked it..


Blah!!!.....................Vote....this was wack battle........lol

Vote.

idc if its crew its Obvious DV killed this kid Let him Reincarnate and Killed him agian.

V/DV

Easy Deadly gets the win...wit better wordplay.and punches...some of other dudes shit didnt even make sence any way vote=DV

killa ur shit was mad stretched and didn't make any since
dv had some nice shit all around and straight merked this kid

v/dv

BREAKDOWN QUICK

killaconcepz: not a gud drop, ure structure was all fucked up......lines too stretched with others real short....didn't give u a very good flow either...it was rather choppy in places...u had a couple of aight punches...most were weak....not much for personals in ure drop either...u need to elevate ure game....OVERALL 5/10

deadlyvisionz: gud drop playa...stretched lines but at least they were all stretched the same length....u had an aight flow goin on throughout....a few decent punches and personals...some hittin hard with others hittin pretty weak....pretty basic vocabs mainly....nuthin much for creativity or originality....i don't need to tell u to elevate...just try in ure battles regardless of who ure opponent is...OVERALL 7/10

V/ - deadlyvisionz

v/ DV.

Ever so slightly less wack. Worst battle i`v voted on this week. Well done.

is wordplay not allowed anymore? anyway ya this was a wack battle, after the first verse i punched myself in the face and deadly's i jus thought about it, maybe it was because i didn't want anymore pain or his verse wasn't as wack, i dont know.

Reppin Connecticut, you're worthless, like a bitch wit no pussy or tits..
.... only line i liked, good creativity, but metaphors are easy use some wordplay, u a vet show some skill, dont jus go a lil above the level of your vs.

Duh!!^^^i didnt even try..lol

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pretty straight forward deadly visionz wins