Keep On *NEW* Past Tense Song
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3729062

Check It Out Recorded ON Spring Break.....its been a while but peep anyways

Kinda old......

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228210
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228358

U got a nice flow..sounds very Del the funky Homosaphien<--or sumthan like that..Backpackerish...An I hate to tell yah..but rap is about all the above..whatever suits the lifestyle. of those thats purchasing the product...Ha!

but nice track..93 till infintity.

Im Hood 'P!

but nice tracks..Very Ole skool...likes it.

Pt is back UPPPPP

past is back up

love the beat

flow is good

ur delivery is lacking though...learn to work your voice more


solid drop





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thanks 4 the feed

uppp

beats is cool mayne

message consistent through out


i like 2nd verse the best....


gun play is gettin played in the industry

good looking out

uppin this up i'll return the favor

solid track my man....good work p.t.

it was mentioned earlier above, but i have to agree: this song is very back-packerish. thats tight....you took it back to the essence playboy. your flow and lyrics are on point and coherant so you definately got your message across to your listeners. the beat is super clean (very nice indeed). the only thing you should have done was fine tune some of the rougher aspects of the track a bit...and make it a little more refined and clean. other than that....you did your thing. keep up the good work bud.


s.v./c.s. legend

alllright good stuff

thats what I was on at the time I do everything fam

uPPIN

lol....I used this beat before. It's such a chill beat man. There's something about your quality that's making it hard to hear you. I think it's your SSSSSSSSSSSSSSS......yeah, that's what it is. I think you might have done a little too much talking on this in perportion to your actual rappin, but it was chill man. Good shit :thumbup:™

Also, I don't like how you came back in with the verse after the talking.....I almost turned it off before I heard you spitting.

^^^lol. i thought it was an original beat.

s.v.= dumb dummy. lol.


s.v.