**GHOSTE** vs Da_Throwdest
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r
NO HATE VOTES

crew battle

NOK vs Higher Aptitudes

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Check in by: 03-07-05 at 07:19 PM

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**GHOSTE** has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 12:33 PM.

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 06:44 PM.

...Ur Lyrically About 2 Get "Nok'ed Out...

!!..Watch this Clip-Pop wit Rib-Shots That 'End Ghoste's Plots' as i 'Punch Mid Sections'
Injections make tension & have ya 'Ghost Ripped Out' like 'Eliminating Stupid Expressions'..!!
!!..so b Expectin-A-Blessin cuz this is 1 lesson that don't give Myth-Help
cuz 'Punches 2 Chest' will 'Buckle Ya Shoulders' like 'Unda Knecks Whipped w/ Belts'..!!
!!..admit ur shelved cuz u bout 2 'Hit Ur Self' like 'Flicks From Fight Club'
imma Night-Thug witta knife/snub that has u 'Catch Feelings' Healings w/ 'Gun-Love'..!!
!!..the Gun-Tucked got this Dumb-Fuck w/ 'Runned Luck' like 'The Leprechaun Olympics'
punch u missed it? now i got 'Gh-ost Think About' like 'Reminising His Own Shit'..!!
!!..gotta Toned-Clip wit a Chrome-Tip that 'Take Ghost Out' like 'Eliminating Downplay Factors'
leaved u punch layed, Bastard! cuz i got 'Da Ghoste Ripped Quick' like 'Over Payed Actors'..!!

now look here slim, i hope u dont expect this win
u claim to be like 2pac*, but look wut happened to him**
yo own crew wont miss u*3, dont bother strappin dat seatbelt
dis dude must hate his *punches* cause homie u *(k)need* help*4 (get it)
u wanna try to make it big, but u get *noticed* less than hobos*5
this homo cant be elavatin, 2 wins of his came from no-shos
lets all give this fag the boot, cause all ur hits...i juke
u cant truly think u got talent...DAMN...ur punches make maggots puke

*1- in a post he compared himself to 2pac...
*2- tupac ended up dead...
*3- their leader bailed on the whole crew...
*4- punch:knee (as in) "punch some1, then knee them in the stomach) :)
*5- every1 ignores hobos :(

uppin............................................. .................

ghoste wish he merked me ha ha but uppin this 4 sum votes

lmao...uppin...................................... ..

Voted For: **GHOSTE**

V/ghoste.....he gets my vote cause he came wit good wordplay an punchs wit better structure he had good consistent diss's...throwdest
u had a good verse but ur structure was off u had some good lines but u werent consistent wit the diss's...no hate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=g
closer=g
structure=g
vocab=g
punchs=g
personal=g
overall=Ghoste

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Voted For: **GHOSTE**

Ghoste: nice drop i can tell you didnt even try on this one .. you had some witty things i had to read it twice before i really understood it all. ha only thing i really didnt like was ur closers. but otherwise your shit had me laughing like the hobo line.. and the knee line was really good..

da throwdest: you had a good drop.. but ur structure was off. nice vocab. but you just didnt come as hard as ghoste on this one. your punches were decent . cept ghoste dropped flat out disses and u jus dropped nothing really personal .

again nice drop on both sides

Vote//Ghoste

thnk u...........................................still uppin...im glad spme ppl can actually leave producted feed on this site...

This was feedback posted for **GHOSTE**
 

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

vote = throwdest

basically, he won it with better multis and complexity...although it was borderin on tha over-complex...had to re-read most lines and tha structure can be hard to read. lines a little stretched for my liking. but really, i don't think you were tested in this battle.

ghoste..u need to be a bit more harder with tha punchz - nothin really connected there...although its good you tried to use personals. also if you gonna go up against somone like throwdest you need to improve your vocab, cos although your shit would do well against someone less experienced, your verse looks simple in comparison.


anywayz...

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

yo you know i gotta give you this one g that was some sick werk man best ive seen from you

punches da
opener da
closer da
multis da
personals da

yo ghoste werk on ya werd play

yo da throwdest nice werk dawg

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