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Whore of the World
Whore of the World.mp3 - 3.19MB
zshare file- I got my wife singing on the hook wit me http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k34NOdPIqlg ^^^ youtube video of the song |
listening, first verse dope feeling the lyrics, and the hook with u and your girl singing sounds really really good, would recommend doing it again in the future,
2nd verse is dope, feeling the message and ive noticed just from listening to u in the past youve gotten alot better with delivery and mic presence..dope track..only thing i didnt like was the vocal tags on the beat, there was only two but good choice of beat to.. drop a link to download i will def bump. |
thanx for the feed, much appriciated.
.. i put it on zshare cuz you should be able to download it from there. i liked my girl on the track alot too, she's sang alot in church and stuff but we meshed well. i'll be tryin to incorperate her in the future for sure. .. another track wit no swear words, its more soothing i think and compared to most rappers out these days it seems it could make the track stand out more. |
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your flow and tone and expression all stayed the same through the whole song, I actually didnt think it was that bad til after 2 mins I was like k now I had enough and turned it off
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yeah it does get a bit repetitive. thanks for the feed... homo :thumbup:
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i was honestly feeling the flow,but i was wondering your picture on myspace doesnt fit the big pic shit you posted on here..curious about that?? and why are both your songs in your sig the same song??wondering about that to?? and what ever happened to jay summers?
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my myspace is much more local stuff, i rapped wit a crew in my area and i got those songs on there, and on my reverbnation. that crews live productions and i just went with mark schafer cuz thats my name and what people know me as locally. i go by big pic on here most the time cuz thats what my names been for a long time, but i perform as myself. .. youtube, i've just been gettin into and am just learnin how to use. thats why the link to youtube is the same, i dont know how to use it correctly yet, but i got two vids on there on the link you can see as my 2 uploaded vids. and jay moved to new orleans. .. i'm obviously not a famous rapper and i'm not tryin to be... anymore. i'm always learning and creating new direction to my music so my sites don't all fit together cuz i don't really work on that. i just post'um when i got'um |
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