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1-2-3-教務長起 05-15-04 06:27 PM

Lifes a Bitch
 
:hump:

but theres another side to this story// one that no1 nos...//i did coke//drank//bottles of jack// fucked underage girls// both white and black//bitch ur exposed//exposed// now this case is closed //treated me like a slave// now im gonna kill ya and piss on ya grave

dont cum near me//ok..//or u'll pay // i'll kill ur wife// with a fucking knife// i cut off ur head// now ur fucking dead

feat. Baby-Girl

Soul Sickness 06-02-04 01:09 PM

wack all around improve everything kid............................................... ........................

KKbug 06-11-04 10:53 PM

wow i don't think my 1st post waz that bad..........not to be mean...but i don't kno jus' chill a lil, use bigger words, try to do some thing no one else has done, and try to get your lines the almost same lenth (don't jus' put one word as a line)

Willa 06-11-04 10:57 PM

this would b a better audio but either way its wack lol
work on structure vocab

Primus17 06-11-04 10:59 PM

Lemme just say that you oughtta put a lil heart in your freestyles...

Canopy 06-11-04 11:14 PM

yeah this was wack...needs a lot of improving


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