Lifes a Bitch
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but theres another side to this story// one that no1 nos...//i did coke//drank//bottles of jack// fucked underage girls// both white and black//bitch ur exposed//exposed// now this case is closed //treated me like a slave// now im gonna kill ya and piss on ya grave dont cum near me//ok..//or u'll pay // i'll kill ur wife// with a fucking knife// i cut off ur head// now ur fucking dead feat. Baby-Girl |
wack all around improve everything kid............................................... ........................
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wow i don't think my 1st post waz that bad..........not to be mean...but i don't kno jus' chill a lil, use bigger words, try to do some thing no one else has done, and try to get your lines the almost same lenth (don't jus' put one word as a line)
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this would b a better audio but either way its wack lol
work on structure vocab |
Lemme just say that you oughtta put a lil heart in your freestyles...
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yeah this was wack...needs a lot of improving
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