!!!!!!!!!!!!lil verse-sum feed back pleaze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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ma shit mo lethal den a loaded deuce clip//
and ma flow iz so grimy it make pussy seem sick//
i spit dez metaphores wit great precision//
ma flow so nasty it make pussy seem delicious//
God put me on da earth 2 cause destruction//
ma brain iz lyke a chemistry experiment, mix sum metaphores and similes and theres an erruption//
i sip hypno, hennesy, and bun mad trees//
and lyrically i cure ma enemies of STD's//
2 many emcees have da Shit Talkers Disease//
but its all good, cuz play will lowa dey self-esteem//
lyrically im inclined 2 spit terrible descibles//
ma shit iz lyke food poison it aint fuckin eatible//
i spit dis shit wit nuff drastic tactics//
slingin dez rhymez lyke dey fuckin elastics//
ma flow iz nastier den pussy wit cancer//
once da nines start poppin, i leave dez fools lookin lyke dancers//
now imma end dis shit in a unique way//
id lyke 2 close by sayin fuck yall and have a nice day//

i bit da ending frum 8 mile only cuz i couldnt think of a good ending but besides dat i thought ma verse wuz iight, wat yall think?

holla @ me!

feed back u mutherfuckers...wake up!!!!!!!

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......shit yall wake up and give me sum feedback.....damn i mean show a nigga sum love!
where ma MP niggaz at!!!!!!!

you straight the rhymes was straight the whole 8 mile thing wasnt coo but at least u wasnt tryin to act like that was yo shit

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<illest nigga alive

GROOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSS, naw just playin, i know how it is, em and everybody else have taken all the good ryhmes, were left with scraps, were the lyrikal vultures, overall good rhymes, but dude, you contrtadicted urself 2 times, nine, duece, glock, gun talk in all is off dog, that went out with morris day and the times, but what can ya do, ill up it fo ya

uppin ^^^^^^ OnE

lol... pussy is delicious so dont try that... and the thug thing is over... otherwise it was cool

zeen nuff respect yall uppin 4 mo comments