visinE vs. Frito
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I'll roll ya whole verse up like a burito, then leave you Layed out like Frito
Ya drop was tight but like a speedo, lookin for d/r votes so i call you guido Screamin' bleed ho!, real raw knock ya teeth down ya throat Scheemi'n off greeed yo, rob all ya stock creepin round ya home Ya punches is played out, as i'm dippin fists "in the club" I puncture ya brain now, sub-mission hits wit my snub Too far behind now it looks like you'll never catch up Frito's still watchin 8 mile tryna battle witta clever set up but ya decisions is no better than the garbage you spittin watch me shittin on every letter you harvest from ya writtin |
Im the enemy the enema fucked you with literally
Physically, Mentally you arent lyrically profound Faggot you are, if Yoda were around Ill put you in rewind, instead of fast forward, pause....play...Be Kind, be afraid of my horror Hello? Mr. Voorhies please....(Kill Kill Kill).... Hey Jason, this guy thinks he's Superman, turns out hes just Christopher Reeve So I send you with a Sayonara, Bon Voyage, see you later bye Ill pass you the visine to help clear that tear from your eye |
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aight this battle was weak and punchless but fuck it i already wasted 63 seconds reading it so i might as well vote
Flow- tha first kid-take that dumb ass white glow shit off so somebody can read ya name punches-none metaphors-none worth shit structure-2nd kiddo line that won the battle-that harvest line even though i doubt you intended for it to be a play on words |
yea ok man^........................
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Vasaline wins this. Ahha. But really, he had nice punches and good metas throughout unlike Frito. Okay battle, need improvment.
Vote: Vasaline |
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visine took this one, better style and work on punches, frito lackin the depth in his punches and ending, not bad either of u, holla
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