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Drama Queen Vs. The Revelation
Rules This Week, Contestants Give Eachother Topics. One Person Has To Write About What The Other Wants Them To Write About, And Vice Versa. Topics Are Also Due Wednesday. ~Good Luck To The Both Of You~ |
Checkity Check Check
I'll have to think about that topic though... |
Haha, well isn't this ironic DQ? Uh, I'll give ya a topic tomorrow probably.
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Eyes of the Opposite Sex
Go crazy DQ. :thumbup: |
For you I got...
Divine Comedy (if you really really really want another topic, hit me up...) |
Nah, I got a good idea. Hope you like mine for ya, if not I'll change it. Good luck, DQ. This time I promise to show, full skill :thumbup:
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I'll show too even though I'm asking for an extension, I'll probly drop on Saturday but to be sure, I'd suggest Sunday. The reason is the following: I am in the middle of my exams right now and they are a bit different than in the USA. I've got 12 exams, several oral, several written, sometimes even two on one day. But I will drop without a doubt, with a bit delay possibly...
Topic is just fine :thumbup: |
Extension granted...
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So does that mean I get an extension too?
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wow.. the 2 ppl im closest with more than ne other ppl on rv r now battling each other? wow thats wierd... werd too bad i no-showed.. i wonder if i'd be here if i tried? werd!! im wierd
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topic: The Light..
Leading To A New Road Hopless werd iono.. im wierd |
Yo, I'm goin to a bon fire tonight and leavin soon, so I will drop tomorrow. sorry bout this, px
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Through The Eyes of The Opposite Sex . . . Mesmeric moody eyes thoroughly perceiving the world's demise As her soul silently cries, knowing there is a fall after every rise For she has stumbled down and crawled on the fiery filthy ground Times she'd almost drowned with her heart in the lost and found No one truly grasps what lies behind her mask, what eyes hide Many have tried but none could apprehend what collides inside . . . Death penalty as her fate to which not one person could relate Due to weight she has to carry, she was once led by blind hate Towards that covering cocoon with every little detail as her jail Trying to get rid of that protective veil, she tried but only to fail Crawling in mud, locked in this rotten shell of flesh and blood Lonely nights she spends cutting in it, tasting a crimson flood Dreadfully disgusted by her silk skin for it’s not who she is within Line between hate and love is so thin for envy became her sin Views blonde beauties wishing she was them, oh so careless She was left behind completely airless by a sudden rare stress Caused by an impatience in her soul to show who she really is Urge to break free in a beautiful bliss to prove she truly exists Perceiving the world through eyes of a man and soul of a girl As lonesome wolf she hurled due to her mind being so twirled Creating cruel, cold life caught up in body of the opposite sex Confused because of complex thoughts that her soul reflects Voluptuous females claim not one guy could do what he can But how do you tell someone you’re a woman inside a man? . . . DQ |
Introduction:
'Welcome everybody, for the show of show's is starting to unfold, Sit down and turn off your cellphones and all your radios! Shut all doors and pull in your curtains, and close your windows! For the comedy stylings of the one and only is about to go, This man can tell you how life is now, tomorrow, rich, or ghetto! His views are told and unrolled like a drugee's billfold! Actions are sold and has blacks, whites, rap, rock, all to follow, Whether you act, dance, sing, rap, alto, tone deaf, or soprano, All the other comedians fighting for the scene better throw in the towel, Cuz he is, the one, the only, Alpha and Omega, God the most hallowed!' Opening Act:
Hello everybody, glad to see you out in this storm, Seems like outside is freezing, it's only February but let's make it a little warm! *Flicks wrist* Haha there, now it's 75 degrees in the middle of snow, Glad to see you all are enjoying yourself already at the beginning of my show. Wo, was that Jesus, or am I just seeing an illusion? Keep spreading my doctrine son, whether it's populated or urban! You know I got this letter the other day, message kind of hurt me, It said, 'I used to believe in you God, but now I suffer, why did they convert me?' So you know what I did? I made a little letter in return for his question, Everyone left him so I was alone with him, guess he didn't catch my intervention. Even with technology and email somehow spam infiltrates my computer, Usually just a joke saying, 'God I can't take her anymore, I'm gonna shoot her!' Just asking for help but I just shrug it off, nother person trying to see me, I mean, why would some guy go and kill a girl because to him she is sexy? I'm on my computer all day, call me a nerd if you wish, But remember those "natural disasters?" ya even God has a hit list. I see your faces are drooping, the smiles are kind of fading, Wait! Don't give up yet, listen to this joke it's amazing! So a guy walks into a bar right? And orders a drop of vodka, I think, alright, another night of fun and maybe a little bit of trauma. The dude orders more and more, till he can't walk home without a concussion, So I get this chick to go up to him and show a good old session. Well, here's the funny part, the chick, ya she has this disease, that will end up making you so weak you wouldn't be able to reach your knees! What's wrong, do none of you find that in the least bit funny? Well guess what? You all just lost half your life, possessions, and money! Closing Act: Well my friends, slaves, everyone listening at home, I think you better call your family, friends, and get em on the phone. Cuz you last minutes together, will be your only memory of joy, You know that crush you girls have on your sunday paperboy? Well you better go tell him, cuz the final curtain is about to fall, This wall between the worlds is disappearing, and time for the call, But before this time ends, think of all the time you wasted at the mall. Or the house, or your room, or someplace where you just killed time, Remember when you made fun of that white boy who tried to write rhymes? Cuz his lines were bad, and you figured he would never amount to fame? That his lyrics were about nothing and like all of mainstream he was the same? Or that girl who starved herself because you said she needed to lose weight? That in order for her to be happy, she needed to weigh 90 pounds on the date? Or what about that nerd, who was just trying to get along with everyone, But had a bloody nose, and whipped out a gun before the year was done? Think how you lived your life and how strong your vine is to me, No more happy faces? Haha, geuss you all didn't catch the divine comedy. |
hmm.. this was an okay battle.. not the greatest.. but yea..
DQ.. well wussup beautiful.. lets see. her verse was pretty good.. structure doesn't matter... only the flow.. so yeah the flow was pretty nice.. and iono how u do it.. but like in your verse.. it had this smooth feeling when you read it.. like u can't see the multi's you put in there.. which causes ur flow to be so smooth like the waves gliding with the ocean (werd nice metaphor) but yeah.. your verse was nice.. i could feel the emotion but i could see any imagery.. imagery and emotion is very important.. if u dont have good imagery.. its like watching a movie.. but there's no screen... you can only hear the words and would almost seem impossible to picture what's happening.. and vice versa.. Wierdo aka T.R.: well well well.. my other hommie shizzle my nizzle.. well ur verse was confusing at the beggining.. because at first i was expecting something pretty funny.. yet i found nothing funny.. it was all serious.. and once again that part confused me.. but untill the end it made sence.. you switched the topic around which was pretty creative.. i liked how u explained things of a person's life and things in the world.. yea alot of people know how these things always happen.. but yet dont really see it.. like only untill they read it or see it in person.. they dont realize how what they do to other people in skewl or in public basiclly could seriously affect their lives.. and you showed it in here n made me realize it some more lol.. nice verse.. seriously.. this is f'n hard to vote on because it is so damn close.. but i got to go vote for my wierdo hommie T.R... no i aint' voting him just cuz he's my coolio hommie.. i just got more into his verse.. ur my hommie shizzle too DQ n u know that.. i just find his verse more interesting to me.. Vote: Wierdo aka T.R. ~1~ |
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