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tru ryda 08-23-04 05:55 PM

tru ryda vs christsidesoulja
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r votes

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 05:55 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 08-23-04 05:56 PM

tru ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 05:56 PM.

tru ryda 08-23-04 06:27 PM

yo

this battle was finished before it began/
ill have u diminished into the ground which is the beginning of ma plan/
ill find ways to get to ya head inside and out/
ull get rays in ya eyes from my fire thats blazing and provide a guide and route to losing to me, its not so bad but its amazing it only stings for a second, just like a bee/
its fast, quick and pretty much painless,its like a blast and just a click and itll leave u stainless/

what do u do at home all day?
eat until foam comes out ur mouth and then go have another refrigerator buffet?,and why is there white shit all over the computer screen?/
ur tha jackoff champion but dog, ur only fourteen,ya rooms full of plaques from when u were 5 years old to now, o shit thats a good accomplishment let man do a fuckin bow/

gl man drop yo verse

System 08-24-04 08:23 PM

ChristsideSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 08:23 PM.

ChristsideSoulja 08-24-04 08:41 PM

step in the jungle//when i come you feel the ground rumble//when i swing you tumbble//listen//you dick//fuckin fake ridder//your momma//you tryin to put your little dick inside her//now look//when i drop this shit//you better come back quick//or i quit//because i dont have time for it//i have to pick your mom up at six//you like a hungry eattin fat bitch//give me,the,knife//i'll make you twitch//hit you in the face//got you talkin like stitch//and you gettin wipped with sticks//in the back//see im gonna make you miss//the days you were in layin in laze//sayin to yourself//justblaze//but now you gettin your fuckin ass whooped//in these dayz//im the king//of this castle/and thats the way it stays//
got you on your knees in battle rage//
i dont need to push anything it just plays//dude your gay//no one knows maybe you should keep it that way//
these lyrics//are made by//havin shit//but you dont understand//a mans//life//
the only you ganna win is bitting//your ryhmes need some help//and i aint liying//you only had one hit//your high//your flying//smoked got canser your diying//why me?//you tryin to be cruisifiying//i damallished your last dude you battled//and now your crying//

ChristsideSoulja 08-24-04 08:42 PM

IP: F2F9 CC70


step in the jungle//when i come you feel the ground rumble//when i swing you tumbble//listen//you dick//fuckin fake ridder//your momma//you tryin to put your little dick inside her//now look//when i drop this shit//you better come back quick//or i quit//because i dont have time for it//i have to pick your mom up at six//you like a hungry eattin fat bitch//give me,the,knife//i'll make you twitch//hit you in the face//got you talkin like stitch//and you gettin wipped with sticks//in the back//see im gonna make you miss//the days you were in layin in laze//sayin to yourself//justblaze//but now you gettin your fuckin ass whooped//in these dayz//im the king//of this castle/and thats the way it stays//
got you on your knees in battle rage//
i dont need to push anything it just plays//dude your gay//no one knows maybe you should keep it that way//
these lyrics//are made by//havin shit//but you dont understand//a mans//life//
the only you ganna win is bitting//your ryhmes need some help//and i aint liying//you only had one hit//your high//your flying//smoked got canser your diying//why me?//you tryin to be cruisifiying//i damallished your last dude you battled//and now your crying//

ChristsideSoulja 08-24-04 08:48 PM

are we going again?..how many times you wanna drop?

j_da_monsta 08-24-04 08:48 PM

Voted For: ChristsideSoulja

Aiight battle but I ain't gonna do a line by line, too many lines.

Plain and simple......this battle was mediocre, you both need to work on your structure and try and make your stuff rhyme atleast.

Punches-Christsidesoulja

Structure-(Both sucked) Christsidesoulja

Multi-Christsidesoulja

Creativity-None (Basic nursery rhymes.)

Final Vote- Christsidesoulja


Both of you need to elevate alot. Christside and tru ryda need to work on your structure and rhyme scheme, it's just to......off.
Keep working at it and you'll eventually get it........hopefully.

tru ryda 08-24-04 08:57 PM

u only spit once ok

ChristsideSoulja 08-24-04 09:00 PM

oh and tru ryda or whatever it is,im 13,not 14,sorry,get it straight

tru ryda 08-25-04 06:36 PM

sry my pussy lol j/k uppin this shit man come on

tru ryda 08-26-04 06:33 PM

uppin come on people lets go lest go

tru ryda 08-27-04 10:42 PM

uppin come on people lets go lets go........

Milk-E-Wae 08-28-04 05:00 PM

Voted For: ChristsideSoulja

ima give it 2 christside, but both battles were horrible, yall need 2 work on ur flows and vocab, yall need 2 elevate..

LIL'DREW 09-03-04 03:48 PM

Voted For: ChristsideSoulja

dis dude took da battle..his verse had betta punches...flow and wordplay...
tru ryda almost had it...but css just had an overall betta verse...

nice battle...

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