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"Hollow Tips" ft. VanGo
What!, You Didnt Even See It Comin Baby...
Abstrakt And VanGo, Puttin Down Like This... [[Verse One: Abstrakt]] Phase Crews Whole Threw Nasled Vocal Soaked Flows... Coke Nose Brute Blows Strew And Strangle Choke Holds... Broke Bruised And Tangled Youths Pulled To Ropes Folds... As I Poke Oaks N' Dangle You So You Can Hope To Pose Bold... Explode Tunes Threw Bass Boosts As ATT's Notes Fuse... Pass Tracks That Use Both New And Old To Anoint You... Dudes Abused By ATT, Flew Back Like Coops With Rats... Kids Misused And Splashed By Flows Like Hoopless Hats... As Roothless Mics Crash And Boost My Raps Like Tools In Math... Add The Facts, You Maxy Pads Have Soaked Enough Of ATT To Produce Syntax... Thats Right Faggots, I'm Back!!!... [[Chorus]] Underground Temptists, Collect Our Reps Bitch... Stain The Streets, Bleed, Message Left Seams Momentus... Hold The Titles, Idle The Engines... End This As Hollow Tips Injest Your Tensions... [[Verse Two: VanGo]] I chop necks, Van wrecks, Mp3 and tape decks throw craps, relapse, 2005 tinted Lex Pimp hoes, fast lane, shouldve been a hoop star overrated, underrated, pulling bitches at the bar Simpletons with simples raps, Sleepy city, Call it Nap Lyrics like a gangstas life, only living for the Clap Dirt naps, nightcrawlers, friends i cant face tomorrow All I ever need is money, too much pride to ever swallow Usually faded, penetrated, heart is young soul outdated Im back up in this bitch again, tell your mama that i made it [[Chorus]] Underground Temptists, Collect Our Reps Bitch... Stain The Streets, Bleed, Message Left Seams Momentus... Hold The Titles, Idle The Engines... End This As Hollow Tips Injest Your Tensions... You Kids Dont Even Know, Dont Even Know Whats Coming... [[Verse Three: Abstrakt]] How Obscures Abstrakt? How Do My Words Mix Match... But Sound As If His Lips Drownd Out Herbs In Packs... Grab The Readers, Lur Then Tac A Leader That Serves Like Feeders... Slike I Bread Believes To Sin, Blasfimers Attach To ATT's Hips Like Femurs... Sacreligious Leader, Passion Of Christs Demener As These Judgements Teter... Act As This Intuidistic Breather With Such Fluent Abundance Of Seether... The One With Head Circumfrance Infled, Egotistical, Pumpis Inbread... Gun With One Spirt A Sentance, Spit Lead To Send Kids Visuals Pumped With This Cred... Thats Right Motherfuckers, It Was Over Ya Head From The Begining... Big Up To My Fam Vang For Jumping On The Track... We're Killen These Kids... Think Im Only On Some Topical Shit, Fuck You!!!... Atty...VanGo...Thats Whats Up, We Out Baby... .One. |
This is hard. I am feelin the dopic depthness is felt imagery could been a lil betta but this would sound so sick on audio man....dammit
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thanks for the feed dv. uppin for more feedback.
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this was an allround ill drop.
good work from both, its been awhile since Abstrakt dropped something,its about time. |
this was dope guys, i was feeling the emotion in this and the flow was great, the vocabulary was ill as well, mad props and respect to you both, keep doin it...pc1
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Thanks For The Love...
I Tried Giving Everyone A Different Style On This One... Cuz Mostly Everyone Only Knows Me For My Topicals... This Is Just Alittle Something Of My Straight Text Style... And Again... Big Thanks To VanGo, Your Verse Was Crazy... And If I Ever Actually Get My Audios Moving We Should Make This An Audio... Thanks For The Feedback... Upping... .One. |
fuck this aint right for open mic of the month man..sorry but it aint. its good for open mic ofn the year tight spit guys werd keep spitten
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This was a really dope piece, everything flowed damn near perfectly. The wordplay and multies were used amazingly. there was decent imagery for a piece that had no real topic but that made this piece better. i think the chorus could have been just a little bit better but for text it was a straight chorus. If it was an audio the chorus would need a little work. most definately it was a hott open mic, and i think so far its the best ive seen this month good shit keep em' coming.
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We Had A Different Chorus...
And I IMed Just About Everyone And They Picked That One... If We Do This On Audio Later We'll Use The Other One... Cuz Alotta People Said The Other Was Better For Audio And This Was The Better Of The Two For Text... Thanks For Love... .One. |
yo, that woz a dope verse man, wordplay was sick
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shit MAYNE.....this really was crazy...i enjoyed readin it....wordplay and vocab was crazy in all verses.....very creative aswell...i aint seen nuthin better this month.......good work guys.....
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nyce drop, i likde the flow and use of multies although imagery coulda been better, overall the verses were sik.. try to make an audio out of it?.
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That shit was tiiiiiiight....the flow was on key...everything above par...the hook was hot...spits were hot...everything was HOT!....this was a very nice collab....dopeness
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wow, hahaha, u guys really got me on this one.. u ppl wrote a ill open mic!!! U had 10/10 multis, 10/10 vocab, 10/10 structure, and u were on topic..damn u ppl were good.. good luck on open mic of the month
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ill drop no doubt id vote it peice of the month
abstrakt ur flows gotten alot better abstrakt topical head of the month no doubt u own it |
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