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Maku JaiiLiin vs Limited Edition
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-01-04 at 07:53 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 07:53 PM.
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Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 06:11 PM.
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...A'yo... Like your battles...ya blinds need to be closed... Keep to yaself...nobody wants anotha geek exposed Ya gotta fucked up name...wat is a Maku Jailiin..? Must be part of the reason you have a pic of Marylin Mansen What are the Omens..? Bunch of rappers who are Gothic? With faces so cold and pale...how can you drop hot shit? I know I have shocked you...in a way that you cant breathe... The only fact that I'm ill backs up... ..."I am what you Can't Be"... Alotta the shit is in his sig...look at his sig, and you will get my punches... |
Are you gonna show or what? Doesnt take long......
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you to the slaughter I bring, herb, till aorta and things hurt//
from this part of his team, exposed as a lord of the rings nerd//* ya couldn’t see my fist comin, now ya lip has been broke// so the “blow” was unexpected,~ like a surprise shipment of coc// If I’m seen packing heat, with the bullets to blast ya team// I’ve killed one ya, I’d just need limited editions of magazines//** Ya personal best, when I serve you a verb in a breath// could turn to a mess, like epidermis from burners and teks// externally wet, blood in turn stick ya shirt to ya chest// and turn ya life into it’s second birth, before you learn that its death// soften ya actions, cuz I’m too grimey and hard for you// ya couldn’t be a rider, if bill gates cosigned on a car for you// Defeating this lame, with a new lesson easy to gain// I’ll reach in his brain, with bullets signatured, and teach him my name// *dissing on that whack, frodo baggins post on poetic scriptures. **i battled a member or former member of his crew named syck, and got a 5-0 win on him. the rest is a play on magazines, talking about magazines in a gun, using his name in it too. you get it. i don't need to shoot at him much. |
Slept on....uppin'................................
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Here's a battle that I really enjoyed.
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Very nice punch. Quote:
LOL when I clicked the link. I'mma keep this one real short. Opener-Maku Structure-Limited Edition Punches-Maku Multi-Maku Closer-Limited Edition (That last line was pretty good.) Final- Maku Jailin Both have good battling skills, but Maku took it with more punches and personals, especially with that LOTR shit. Keep battling both of you. |
uppin 4 votes on this one............................................... ........................
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Voted For: Limited Edition
Limited Edition gets my vote...nice punches they were pretty hard...and they landed...structure was in place...and not stretched-out..and a nice vocab...easy to read & all that.... |
A'ight...thx uppin this shit..............................
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uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin'............................................ ..........
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Voted For: Limited Edition
limited good ass ender the opener is good too i liked the manson bar lmao EXPOSED anyways i liked the whole flow and vocab was good disses and punches gave you a hot verse 7/10 maku good vocab good ass wordplay opener was corny FUCK YOU I LIKE LORD OF THE RINGS anyways the line was still decent that coc shit was whacked as fuck thoughthe verse was a lot of self glorification and i hate that punches and disses lacked they aint really hit work on disses and youll be dope cuz your wordplay and flow is good as fuck a 6/10 basically you lost cuz limited had better disses and punches and thats what wins battles |
A'ight, thx...uppin' for this to be closed....................
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