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Burnin CD's
yo im at my computer just donwloadin songs
when an ad pops up headlined Bitches In Thongs looked like good porn so i clicked on the shit a virus on my comp called dirty whore clit Im like wtf so i reformatted my comp started downloadin again n guess what pops up im like control alt delete n it wus gone for some time but you know the net more pop ups and signs im like fuck it ill just use kazaa lite i downloaded my shit n wus down for the nite so the next day at my comp i put the CD in and wtf the ad popped up again so control alt delte once more wus burnin CDs form like 1 until 4 one last cd for me to burn n im done so i figured while it burns ill have some fun when n played madden for a bit came back to the screen and im like O SHIT CD wus already written on n hadden been burnin at all and then all of a sudden the phone rings A PHONE CALL? it wus the FBI somethin about illegal music i wus like i never heard of it how could i use it? Kazaa is the program we now it was you i respond What are you talking about my user name is Bugz not imajew.. ahh ha so now we no that u did it i wus like naw im just kiddin i never heard of that program i use NAPSTER o shit i meant... excuse me sir youve been captured this guy busted down my door n put me un cuffs im like dude my cds still burnin hold the fuckup hes like okay sir it wont hurt to download a few more songs n lok what popped up BITCHES IN THONGS im like this thing keeps poppin up what is it hes like an illegal downloadin tracker u idiot im like shit so thats how they found out hes like its time to leave sir were out so im in the back of the car listenin to my headset all of a sudden the car stops were there im not ready yet... they bring me in and say 100$ a track... but dont do it again... so i payed them n went home when a got back... downloaded some more n started burnin cd's... cops showed up again im like dont take me PRETTY PLEASE... they said i wus fucked n that this wus it.... goe to show what kazaa n porn do.... so if you dont wanna be caught dont click it... theres so many ways cops can catch you downloadin shit... so next time dont be a bitch if u really like an artist... pay for music.... Peac3_______________-----------------------_________............... |
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cmon yo i need some replies on this i dont no if its anygood or not somebody come critisize this!
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this seemed pretty basic but funny as fuck...i know what ya talkng bout...fucking virus's....kept to the topic well, quite an original piece...return the favour...PZ
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Yo...liked the topic, i hate viruses and shit. Didnt really flow though, and as deva sed pretty basic shit. I like how you tell the story in order pretty good..and funny!
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That shit was hilarious. Very funny. Nice flow an' word play too. How much trouble did ya get in for doin' it the second time?
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the funnest shit ever seen
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very funny lol and pretty good over all and ya i agree fuckin viruses all over the place
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5this.......... need jus 2 more votes |
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this isnt a true story but the shit where CD's get copied over n all n thye takle forever to burn n shit happens ot me alot... th Kazaa thing wuz like not real for me but it happens people get caugh wit kazaa n fined for it latley.... just needed a topic so it wasnt a true story.... Peac3______________-------------------__________..................... |
yo people peep dis its mah first open mic lookin for some more feedback yall.... drop a link n ill check yallz out...
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That was some funny shit, the vocab was pretty basic, and you used the same couple words to rhyme with in a few of your lines, but it was very entertaining, good topic, funny shit, keep elevating cuz
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Hmmmmmm,
Funny verse.I guess that's all that explain that. |
lmfao fukkin funny man. Haha, finally...I have inspired somebody else to do sum creative shit here and drop sum funny as verses. keep em comin Bugz lmao...
U'll never surpass "a day at McDonalds" tho lmao. Keep makin more!! lol, in this kinda piece...it's better to use small vocab...nobody awnts to hear a funny story with words like "Supercalafragilisticexpialiadoshish" or however the hell u spell it. Keep it simple and tell the god dam story!!! all dat matters...good job man! |
yo people can i get some more feedback?
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