DaRoQ vs Lyrical MC
 

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DaRoQ drops lame punches like jako crunches on childrens penis,
He's a newb wona-b Mc wid dashed hopes of an extremist,
But Lyricals Rhymes are the leanest,one of Rapbattle.com's Cleanst MC's,
DaRoQ catchin hostiliyes wid rhymes makin' good off will smith CD's,
DaRoQ clutches da mic and chokes at da site of Lyricals onslaut,
Facin' Lyrical's lyric court, DaRoQ could'nt drop a line if there was double the gravity,
Lyrical MC's Rhymes scoldin ur mouth like a throbing tooth cavity,
But DaRoQ gettin' merkeb by MC's is just a formality,
DaRoQ new boy on da block,expressin'and perswadin' he's "dope",
but DaRoQ so far away from hostin' mic cred, beta pass him a telescope,

DaRoQ drops lame punches like jako crunches on childrens penis,
He's a newb wona-b Mc wid dashed hopes of an extremist,
But Lyricals Rhymes are the leanest,one of Rapbattle.com's Cleanst MC's,
DaRoQ catchin hostiliyes wid rhymes makin' good off will smith CD's,
DaRoQ clutches da mic and chokes at da site of Lyricals onslaut,
Facin' Lyrical's lyric court, DaRoQ could'nt drop a line if there was double the gravity,
Lyrical MC's Rhymes scoldin ur mouth like a throbing tooth cavity,
But DaRoQ gettin' merkeb by MC's is just a formality,
DaRoQ new boy on da block,expressin'and perswadin' he's "dope",
but DaRoQ so far away from hostin' mic cred, beta pass him a telescope,!!

Im reading the newest issue of High Times while I write these new rhymes/
When I spit lines their War crimes fillin you with destructive signs/
Cuz my opponent Lyrical MC is whack like speaking mimes/
The higher the prize the higher I climb/
The only way you’ll win is if our voters are blind/
Some of the herbs get served with no effort/
Ya head gets knocked around then severed/
My lyrics are vicious and dangerous ya head will need stitchin/
Wondering why I act outrageous? Cuz you won’t stop bitchin/
Lyrical MC, yeah rite, let’s see how hard you can be/
By showin me your lyrical lines that proves you’re not a fake ass wannabe/
Cuz from that shit you just wrote I didn’t feel like you were tryin to diss me/
You gonna walk away from this battle crying, bitch I ain't lying/
Blaming the Visine and I wasn’t even trying/

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Vote - Lyrical MC

Just a few better lines in there,

DaRoQ catchin hostiliyes wid rhymes makin' good off will smith CD's,

Lol.

These kids r funny Really ....
Vote = Lyrical MC

Cos Daroq was not good at alll
& plus lyrical MC made me laugth a bit.

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yo,

lyrical mc...u had an aiight flow and ur structuire was ok. you punches didnt really hit hard enough for my liking put u had some personals which kinda made up 4 them...overall and ok verse

Daroq//ur flow wasnt there and neither was ur structure. You didnt have any real hard hittin punches or personals. overall a definet newb verse..

vote lyrical mc

Lyrical:

DaRoQ drops lame punches like jako crunches on childrens penis,

sick, but funny

He's a newb wona-b Mc wid dashed hopes of an extremist,

dope

But Lyricals Rhymes are the leanest,one of Rapbattle.com's Cleanst MC's,

pretty good

DaRoQ catchin hostiliyes wid rhymes makin' good off will smith CD's,
DaRoQ clutches da mic and chokes at da site of Lyricals onslaut,

too third person

Facin' Lyrical's lyric court, DaRoQ could'nt drop a line if there was double the gravity,

basketball court?

Lyrical MC's Rhymes scoldin ur mouth like a throbing tooth cavity,
But DaRoQ gettin' merkeb by MC's is just a formality,
DaRoQ new boy on da block,expressin'and perswadin' he's "dope",
but DaRoQ so far away from hostin' mic cred, beta pass him a telescope,!!

out of these, i only liked the "formality" line

i think u said "Daroq" too many times.

Daroq:

Im reading the newest issue of High Times while I write these new rhymes/

no follow up, b/c it needs a punchline or reference

When I spit lines their War crimes fillin you with destructive signs/
Cuz my opponent Lyrical MC is whack like speaking mimes/
The higher the prize the higher I climb/
The only way you’ll win is if our voters are blind/
Some of the herbs get served with no effort/
Ya head gets knocked around then severed/

pretty good last 2 line, but a little short on syntax, too prose style

My lyrics are vicious and dangerous ya head will need stitchin/
Wondering why I act outrageous? Cuz you won’t stop bitchin/
Lyrical MC, yeah rite, let’s see how hard you can be/
By showin me your lyrical lines that proves you’re not a fake ass wannabe/
Cuz from that shit you just wrote I didn’t feel like you were tryin to diss me/
You gonna walk away from this battle crying, bitch I ain't lying/
Blaming the Visine and I wasn’t even trying/

pretty good overall, but not really feelin any one part really strong.

vote: lyrical mc, got closer to bein dope and had a laugh

lyrical

flow wasnt there and alot of spelling mistakes. try to type a little more formal because shortening words makes shit choppy. a couple nice lines and mentioned his name alot. not bad


darooq

i dont care what your reading man just fuckin throw punches. you need to attack your opponent alot more. this isnt a song its a battle. you need alot of work


vote- lyrical