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$pitilicou$ vrs.. verbal violence
yo 10 line spit like u said
u spit first first to 5 wins vote thing no hater votes good luck~one~ |
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yo ~*Style Switch*~ ..Smash ya head into concrete cant get to ya feet.. ..Youve Been UpBEAT, wont be able 2 admit this defeat.. ..Holy shit -- Jesus, there must be a huge crisis.. ..$pitilicous gave ur mom a blend of my herbs and spices.. ..This battle is like me nippin at your throat wita knfie.. ..This battle is won with rhymes and verbs = strife.. ..Its clear to me that your a wannabe rapper.. ..Ima chew u up and spit u out into a wrapper.. ..Ima let this one go as i finish you up.. ..Peeps gun be talkin bout this battle like 5th grade gossip.. .. horrible.. spit ur verse |
yo ya whole rep is wack your my bitch u aint obeyin ur pimp come here to get slapped//
lyrically attacked,drop bombs thas a rap i aint commin weak wit out da master planned trapp// spit my verse clean,rip ya whole lines wit my avatar wolverine// ima burn u up like george formons lean mean verbal grilling machine// cops dont even arive on ur murder scene,they say shes to fat if they pick her up it will break they back// if yall ever heard of excell meat she can feed more than that// i read the first word of ur line and i was in a nap// u read my verse i have your ass in a trance// sayin please verbal i will give u head just give me one more chance// u just got merked and as a bonus heres a cyber slap// |
uppin for some votes on dis battle right hurr~one~
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[size=3][font=arial narrow]$pit- Aight you had some good-ass punches in there and that they landed..You also had tha structure which putt'd it in order and the flow was good...
verbal- Aight same to you..you had some good-ass punches and they landed..tha structure was a lil fuck'd up and ya stretch'd ya lines out to far but it was all good..the flow..it was aight..kinda kept messin' up on it cuz of the lengths of your lines 'n' shit... Overall- Both Emcee's did good..both had some good punches in there..but verbal had some harder punches cuz he kept goin' at it...0-1...the structure is gonna have to go to $pit cuz his shit was in order & his lines didn't stretch...1-1...the flow imma have to say $pit becuz his shit wasn't all across the screen and it was good...2-1...the personals is gonna have to go wit verbal cuz george forman shit had done it right there...2-2...the vocab imma have to say...both cuz shit was good and there was no errors 'n' shit....3-3....and the multi's is gonna have to go to verbal cuz he had 3 lines that all rhymed 'n' shit...4-3...verbal winz this one *bearly* v/ verbal violence |
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uppin for some votes on dis battle~one~...........
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i seriously dont kno who won...i dint understand none of em' but the one that was the best to me was violence because of that 'grillin machine line'
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~*Style Switch*~ ..Smash ya head into concrete cant get to ya feet.. ..Youve Been UpBEAT, wont be able 2 admit this defeat.. 4/10 punch hits... ..Holy shit -- Jesus, there must be a huge crisis.. ..$pitilicous gave ur mom a blend of my herbs and spices.. 1/10 punch was o lovetap ..This battle is like me nippin at your throat wita knfie.. ..This battle is won with rhymes and verbs = strife.. 3/10 ok.... ..Its clear to me that your a wannabe rapper.. ..Ima chew u up and spit u out into a wrapper.. 2/10 come up wit sum better pimpin ..Ima let this one go as i finish you up.. ..Peeps gun be talkin bout this battle like 5th grade gossip.. 3/10 i guess.... .. horrible.. spit ur verse yo ya whole rep is wack your my bitch u aint obeyin ur pimp come here to get slapped// lyrically attacked,drop bombs thas a rap i aint commin weak wit out da master planned trapp// 3/10 too long but aight lyrics spit my verse clean,rip ya whole lines wit my avatar wolverine// ima burn u up like george formons lean mean verbal grilling machine// 2/10 loss mee cops dont even arive on ur murder scene,they say shes to fat if they pick her up it will break they back// if yall ever heard of excell meat she can feed more than that// 3/10 too long i read the first word of ur line and i was in a nap// u read my verse i have your ass in a trance// 4/10 good punch sayin please verbal i will give u head just give me one more chance// u just got merked and as a bonus heres a cyber slap// 4/10 good pers. _______verbal gets my vote___________ |
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$pit- you didnt have multies. You set ur shit up good though. I liked the lines in order n shit. I liked ur flow i can tell you was grooving in it. You also had a few punches that could of been better, but, good job. So imma hit ya with a 5/10 Verbal-You had multies, thats good. You didnt really set up ur shit too well, you coulda been a little more organized. But i liked ur flow, i dont know what these people saying they got lost in ur rap n shit, no, i liked ur flow. You also like $pit had punches. so imma hit u with a 5/10 also. (Crowd Confused) So this one is gonna be a close decision. Drum roll plz.................................. .................................................. ................................................. .................................................. ................................................ .................................................. ............................................... .................................................. . ................................................ (In an announcer tone of voice)And the next vote goes to (Drum roll stops)(Silence) Verbal. (Crowds cheering and hurraying) Had to give it to em for the multies. |
Verbal took this one his ryhme scheme was better and his punches were mor on point
"spit my verse clean,rip ya whole lines wit my avatar wolverine// ima burn u up like george formons lean mean verbal grilling machine" that was tha best punch in this battle vote- Verbal |
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