Elooch Vs Killacamflow
 

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Verses - Due Wednesday
Vote - Friday.

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take it easy on me buddy

WoW im checking in but wow this is all E Looch i know u going to get me but hey ill try coming wit something

sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks
toss"Big Rocs"at ya dome so u can be head strong
then put ya legs in ya chest leavin u dead wrong
i'll Make Ya Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache
i know u Pussy So Im Treatin This Battle Like Date Rape
u a manic depressant ya frail words just clasp to feel strife
hold my aaorta an heart above to make ya grasp for real life
aim at ya chest and put the beats away like retired dj's
closin rs tryouts cause for u the shits becomin a cliche :nono:

Fam,you really need to stop actin hard like you rob and snub cats//
You the only 16 year old i know that still watches rugrats//
I blow more wind then a Air CondiTioner//
I kill more germs then a MediCine Perscriptioner//
Im the next best thing on this Rb Text Tourney//
RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy//
I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey//
Im gonna just kill ya rhymes and s8 Own ya//
My verse is so harsh you gonna need a Heart Donar//
he knows he gay, focused aim, but he bout to notice we dont flow the same//
plus, his moms thoughts are 'gutter' when my dicks up her alley like bowling lanes //
i come bustin & manualy cussin & casualy causin cucussion's & casualty's//
you can rock a tie-die shirt and bell-bottoms but ya verse'll never-master-PEACE//

I tried bringing some new shit to ya let see if this gonna win it for me.....Nice flow E Looch

RS-Royal Sickness....
Jevon Kearse Jersey-9-0 meaning im winining 9-0 s8 :)

elooch took dis 1 wit ease killa work on yo structure drop was ok but your flow kinda lacked punches neva connected.....
quick breakdown 4 looch

bestline-sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks

beat him wit dat line

worsteline-none

killa

bestline-RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy//
I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey//

ok i guess

worsteline-stretched linez + 2many

looch-9/10
killa-7/10
winner-e looch

ight preciate somebody votin

seem like my battles always the last to close but ummm

1-0

killa got this one, his shit was hot, that was the hottest i ever seen u wrote keep it up. Also elooch your shit was tight too, but it didn't catch my eye like killa's verse did, so my vote is killa!!!

Favorite lines:
he knows he gay, focused aim, but he bout to notice we dont flow the same//
plus, his moms thoughts are 'gutter' when my dicks up her alley like bowling lanes //
FUNNY AS HELL..LOL!!!!!!!!!

1-1 let get this shit starting i want to see if i beat the big E LOOCH!!!!! lOl

wtf who is that an since when was they in this tournament


uppin

a person on this......she voted so.....i just sayed 1-1 idk this si my first time doing this

lol ight but i dont think u can send people to vote on these just gotta wait for these people to vote

Looch:
sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks

^^Strong start, could be used differently but it was good.

aim at ya chest and put the beats away like retired dj's
closin rs tryouts cause for u the shits becomin a cliche

^^Strong ending...made me laugh...

Kid:

RS is checking on this battle to see if im Worthy//
I'll put up numbers like im wearing a Jevon Kearse Jersey//

^^Damn this was weak.......played....but has to be yo best...the rest was self glorification.

V/: Looch

Why? Cuz i say so....lol Nah he had betta overall verse with betta punches....elevate kid

E LooCh : sonnin cats wit my guns that clap an make lungs collapse
if u put tazors on railroads u couldnt have stunnin tracks
^^Hottest Bar between both ya'll verses.. SykK ass opener^^
^^ ThIs Bar Definately won it for you your whle verse had real nice wordplay...Keep doin you.. ^^

Killa : Your verse was alrihht needed to flow better and you attempted some word play but it wasnt there ..... keep practicin ....

Vote -_- E LooCh