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Its da female bandit and I have officially Landed/
Not candid but I leave most lyrical emcees STOPPED and strandid/ The female version of Hova and that's for serious/ My lyrical apperance Is enuff to stamp me as utterly Ridiculas/ This hear is my checkerd flag and IM SPEEDING/ THis is something u are forced to *believe in* making sure to gain respect AND THEN IM LEAVING/ Leaving you cats worried and sexual studied like a rape victim/ Consider me wired cuz i got more Bugs then ya computer system/ After u get used to me you'll be abusing me like crack/ ME BEING WACK AS FUCK not even KODACK could photo that/ Im an american tradition like *butter spread on toast*/ I MAKE the heat in ya kitchen im scraping you *making you shed the most*/ FIRE RAP IGNITIONS LIKE REMY MARTIN/ U ready to rumble get humble and find ya face on a milk Cartin/ SpokenBluntly the femcee with net and streets cradentials/ FUck wat u been through Glue u still in ur tracks every time i spit its INFLUENTIALS/ SpokenBluntly :thumbup: |
ur flow was offin 2 spots
ur structure needs work that would help ur flow and butter on toast thats corny lol pretty nice drop |
good....
i found the structre fine and the flow was excellent atleast i didn't notice where it was off maybe it was just your dilect you where saying it in will good |
lol i know my flow was scraight (i don't really pay attention to her replys..she has no creditals) but thanks for da ups *ONES*
SB |
ur fukin stupid sb
i gave u a nice fedback how does ridiculous and serious rhyme? |
bad structer needs werk......................
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thanks for ur opinions *ONES*
SB |
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