Color of Love
 

What is love.. a question often asked...
Many Times i have been close to the answer.. but it eluded my grasp...
Love is a Beautiful thing... Its the Essence of life...
In the same sense love is dangerous.. it can change your life...
I look for the answer... from the heavens above..
as the red blood drips down my finger.. i now know
the color of love..

something short and quick.. but alot of emotion..

played topic...but good emotion as you say...but weak vocab and the stucture was mad off...meh...6/10

lol.. yeah this is a poem i just put it in here for more feed...

LIKE PARREL SAID


lots of emotions in an small package...struture is kinda messed up which is the flow is messed up too....upp your vocab....yes it was short but the emotion's of it was expandatory


peace


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"freestyle#2 (breaking out)


peace the link is in the sig fam

nice drop bud

structure is a tad fucked, but good emotion............ its pretty good, but ive seen better of yours........ good vocab i think for such a short drop.... nice.........

damn you fools.. structure is supposed to be off.. it isnt supposed to flow. its more of a poem..

Um. W/e Drop On My Open Mic Fam Peace Return That Fav

dont say whatever in my thread... lol

Like everyone else said... Structure is bad... O well... Not a huge deal...

Love is a Beautiful thing... Its the Essence of life...
In the same sense love is dangerous.. it can change your life...

I mean... Not a bad line... But you use life both times... Which isn't that bad, except for the fact that this poem/song is only 6 lines. Good emotion though.

6/10... Would be better if longer.

uppin.... i repeat this is a poem..