love???
 

she just wants ta be goofy i wanna be serious
she did sumthin to me cuz now im curious
she says shes cautious but is she interested
already feeling nauseous might as well finish it
this shit'll cost us so dont be beginning it
claims shes falling for me but aint hard ta realize
that she does adore me along with 50 other guys
how can this even be me and nikki never met
she'll leave me be ta flirt wit fifty other men
April third she'd be only fifteen then
fucking with my feelings if she gives me head
still wont be enough cuz i feel us bonding
these times are rough cuz i feel forgotten
i know she's too young but i cant help it
maybe im too dumb but still i'ma tell it
she's away from home her cellphones smashed
its eating at my soul and my bones just snapped
my hearts turned cold im so bent in half
in the end i know that i'ma just laugh
and learn ta let go as soon as i attach

my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238687
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234192

MUHAHAHA i re-opened it myself

uppin for feedback or i'll close all ur threads muhahahhaha

it was aight i guess...nothing to special... u got some tallent but u still need to elevate... keep it up man never fold from pressure.. just do yo thing an fuck all the bitches an haters if u like writin this type a shit then dont let no one tell u different.. i give it a 6/10

thanx for the feed...i just put what was troubling me in ink (before i typed it up on rv) so to me i think it was good cuz it got out most of what i wanted ta say but appreciate it that u dropped an outside opinion i'll RTF when i get the chance