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YooNeek 06-09-04 06:23 PM

YooNeek vs (arrow shooter)
 
He nos the rules

YooNeek 06-09-04 06:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by (arrow shooter)
look, dont take everything i say personal, this is a battle im supposed to diss you//
this nigga spits more doodoo than a retarded kid pukin used toilet tissue//
motherfucker its official, to kill you, i could give you one pistol, wit one fuckin bullet//
point the barrel in ya mouth, and put a sign on the trigger that says DUMBASS PULL IT!//
cause dumbasses do dumb shit, its like writing ya name, everybody knows it//
we should rename you 1-rhyme-wonder, cause everybody gets a chance and blows it//
you beatin me? its hopeless, that would be as likely as a nun gettin stoned//
but me beatin you got a better chance than catchin ya momma with her pants off.... gettin boned//
nigga face it, rappin aint ya callin, you at ya end nigga, this gonna be ya downfall//
you and rhymin bout a good mixture as micheal jackson and ten year old's balls//
speakin of balls, i dont throw em nigga, i got precision, my aim neva miss//
alcohol done got my face red, im horny as fuck, i guess you could say im devilish//
one punchline done finished it, put you in the air like 10 potheads gettin high off canibis//
you next on kuntry's hitlist, i know this aint no photagraphers studio mista//
but im bout to snap ya neck like kodak, i hope you get the picture//



that is his verse he did b4 he went offline but he made the thread but didnt add polls so i remade it and reposted his verse

YooNeek 06-09-04 07:51 PM

My second battle,im still spittin dope in ma verse..
obvious you didnt peep ma first...
Cos you wouldnt be lookin at men in playgirls
Your punches you threw they didnt connect...
...Like punches from armless people
They had no kind of affect
I could give you some recognition Cause the voters...
Are clue to your identity...
But you beating me?bitch please dropping your verse b4 mine...
...is the only time your ahead of me
Its sad to say you dont make up your own lines....
...now thats a big factor
....i suggest you quit rhyming cos u is just an actor


fuck his long ass over line limit shit

uppin 1

Archeologist 06-10-04 03:27 AM

\/ote YoNeek but he took the last line from Jay-z but made it his own...
dont act innocent you made it your own ;)...
took it for good punches the Armless man line had me :roll:
Bow n Arrow you were Eh! with a big ass verse..

YooNeek 06-10-04 06:57 AM

ight thnx i never got the last line off jay z but oh well

uppin

YooNeek 06-10-04 10:42 AM

Bump Bump..............................................

YooNeek 06-12-04 09:32 PM

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PLOTT 06-12-04 10:25 PM

Arrow-
Dopest:
motherfucker its official, to kill you, i could give you one pistol, wit one fuckin bullet//
point the barrel in ya mouth,
and put a sign on the trigger that says DUMBASS PULL IT!//
Fuckin funny, shounda made the sign say dont pull it.
Wackest:
speakin of balls, i dont throw em nigga, i got precision, my aim neva miss//
alcohol done got my face red, im horny as fuck, i guess you could say im devilish//
No punch wack shit.
Not bad- feel off towards the end- should dropped some filler.

Neek-
Best:
could give you some recognition Cause the voters...Are clue to your identity...
But you beating me?
bitch please dropping your verse b4 mine......is the only time your ahead of me
Shit puncuation- this ya best punch and its played as tetris.
Worst:
My second battle,im still spittin dope in ma verse..
obvious you didnt peep ma first...Cos you wouldnt be lookin at men in playgirls
Fuck*n wack.
That verse was terrible.

vote-Arrow

(arrow shooter) 06-15-04 04:52 PM

tight 2-2 uppin for more votes
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