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CarsonJetX2 vs VA
10 lines (+)
no:crew |
checked in
also: no feeding. no biting. no hate. no dick riding. |
status check.....
....VA...ur a wanna-vet-An ya tryna front wit Jet?.... lol.....ok....... --------------- checked lines... VA's ryhme's got more circulation than U.S dimes.... arrest u an ur PC at the same time...... on accusation's...typing....ur "destined 2 ryhme?"1 I'll pump 5 bar's strait to your chest...erase ya flesh thinkin u the best..VA..your waste of an IP address....2 This aint a test....You came in "thread"-n-left "undressed" Like u forget, now 1 win less........................... ...............You actually tried to mess wit Carsonjet3 Noticed ya rules-only one-no crew-so u could go-an-bite a few DR one or two,and go on a recycle a bar as If i haven't view'd Bitch you have no clue....... It's simple arithmatic, a win fer me...an "L" for you. Tomorrow afternoon....PM me...an tell me how it feels at 6-an-2 |
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carsonJET aka adict, this marque was a glitch from tha start... ...Failure to quit, so consider these text as sendin this bitch on depart. (jet/plane) Heres yor ticket, I already put yor baggage through... ...theres 1 carson, 2 JETS, 3. Typos and 4 attitudes. (Added 2/carsonjetX2+2) iLL sit you on a flight filled with iraqis, so yor for sure crashin to death... ....“hi sir im a doctor, its good that yor hearts pumpin, but yor lackin yor breath. im changin carson of flight, to carson of tha operation table... ...they won when they fought to keep you stable, at this price you bought tha rate:"disabled". Quote:
...this guy can predict tha future, cuz thats my result once yor put to rest in 2 lines. (1st bar) erm bye personals:va.... cuz (carson JET) and tha whole airplane theme structure:va.... had a storyline to it punches:va.....they hit, and unlike carson’s, you cud read them w/o stumbeling vocab:carson...(sike)....cuz he misspelled his own name Quote:
vote: VA , points to tha fam real votes?? |
you voted on yourself.......
oh my....this is my first up. -1 |
iLL take it out to make you feel better, votes em bye.
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up 2.
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Close bAttle....Very close
VA-Nice spit..that ish was tight... you had vocabulary with the similies and metaphores.. Only a few bugs but you had some creativity which gave you this The structure was basic and decent... 8/10 Carson-Nice drop too...Very close battle for both you had some good stuff like multies..Lack in creativity..Structure wasnt that aight..But ya similies murked it..Good job.... 7.9/10 Overall-CLose battle...Very close but carson jet might win the battle isnt over yet...Nice SPit from both v/VA Becuz I think hes Creativity Murked it.. Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129056 kind of murked him with the personals but Didnt try hard Return the favor Please |
are u fuckin seriouse? omfg...uppin...3
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Aiyo Check It..
CarsonJet2X: 7/10 Your Punches Weren't Hitting Real Hard...But I Liked The Creativitiy and Your Ryhme Scheme Was Definitly Hot. Your Metaphors and Mulits Were Decent. Nice Drop Man. VA: 5/10 Your Punches Coulda Been Hotter With More Wordplay...Your Punches Kinda Lacked Sense...Use More Vocab and Word Usuage...But Nice Drop To You Too. Vote- Carson For Better Punches and Wordplay ~R~ |
Uppin 2
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uPPin
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Uppin 3
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This was a close & one of the best I've seen on RB so far.
FLOW/STRUCTURE=Carson PERSONLS=VA MULTIES=Carson had like one,but VA had none so he gets this WORDPLAY=VA CREATIVITY=BOTH PUNCHES=VA,by a couple of hairs Very close battle.Both some creative stuff in there.VA punches were a tad bit better,so he gets this vote from for that and his creativity. Holla back at least one of my battles |
thanx, uppin more and more
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