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haters
I wont bitch and moan but il take back wat "i own"
haters is my world they unknow people like bizzey think he "bizzey" bone haters are whack i'll hit them back with a "smack a jack" hater u need to get on track ur mouth just "dental plaque" my link |
ryyyyyyyttttttt... this was kinda short but i spose it was alryt... u came a bit weak but there int no need to let loose on am open mic wait for the battle... i liked the first line that was funny...
i think u are elevatin alot... keep it up 6/10 :thumbup: |
thanx eny way......uppin.............
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add 20 more lines to it, for some real feedback.
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20.................hell no
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umm......
yeah... short.... like a 2/10 you need to write more than 4 lines... Like I put whole songs up in this... but do your thing. |
2/10 << wtf.............o fuck this site....it was my 1st and it anit even finsied yet
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eehh...its "ok" a lil short and stretched....
overall-5/10 |
thanx
~1~LS~ |
thats the gayest rap i ever heard...-999/10...
................................................WE RD^ |
fuck u .............................
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