liccity splic u tink ur pretty damn quick motherfucka
 

You try n make me elivate//
ur speakin to me like im a mate//
i aint no mate speakin to me lyk dis conjers up hate and wid dis hate im bound to get Irrate!// Whateva u say will become ur fate// She was ready but u was always late//
E-livate// no no no E-livate// Pray ta god itll be me

Tied up to this carcus// I cant handle this// Treated liek shit chucked on da floor like pretty damn quick/// wid a rifel to my head I have to bend over to give u head on ma own bed//
E-liveate// no no no E-livate- Pray to god itll be me
Look, treatinme like dis aint gona get u no were// lickity splic u tink ur pretty damn quick ur always givin it tha flick but all u r is fuckin sick// Perverted priministor n all da gals obey u// Theyd neva doubt u// Cos u shout .....tru// Im fed up wid u and life...Its a fool// All ur fuckin hoes makin u drool// whilke dey strippin and u attemptin to make em cum in your swimmin pool// up n down n round n round u tink its "so damn kl" Stupid fool.........Stoopid muthafucka
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dat pretty good

ya^^i agreee

dat was staight but simple slo down ya lines and get ya slow staight nice verse tho big up wun,,,,,

You try n make me elivate//
ur speakin to me like im a mate//
i aint no mate speakin to me lyk dis conjers up hate and wid dis hate im bound to get Irrate!// Whateva u say will become ur fate// She was ready but u was always late//


ur flow is messed up in those bars........rule of thumb make ur bars more even

I liked it, but i feel like it needs more work, cause i know u could do better. Stay up!!!

kk thanks ;)
love ya'll

yo u need to work on ur flow big time but i guess it wasnt to badd iight.....................................

not bad babes....

hehe thnx ;)