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Who Am I
I’m uncomfortable in my own body,.. being forced out by my mind I’m alone in my own existence, an entity lost in a world that’s blind I keep having flashbacks,,,.. when I think back I can’t make head or tail I have spells of short term amnesia, where I can never remember my trail I Woke up last night in a hot sweat, the nightmares grow more intense The burden of my nightmares seem to overpowering on my bodies sense The weight is unbearable, the manifestations keep seeming so real How can my mind conjure up something my body can really feel The pieces are finally falling into place,,.. I’m stating to comprehend I created a slip personality so the real me can no longer act or pretend We share the same body, this is the reason I keep having blackouts The nightmares wasn’t dreams this is the reason I need to breakout The civil war of my mind has started their is no way I’m going to win My names no longer Chris, you people better start calling me little Tim |
yo, nice spit.......pretty good, lyked verses 5-8..
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Thanks for the feedback, Uping some more.
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Dawg the spit was decent had depth in it the structure and flow was real good startin to become something we see regulary from you now...i feel ya elevated real good since being here man props to ya
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Yo good man. I liked how you used good words but kept it flowing, good man.
hey can you hit up my battles. |
Thanks for the feed back,.... Respect to both.
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y'all dis was nice man, good flow, ithink in places u had 1 too many syllables but the rhymes was stikll dope. Word. Peace. 1ne
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Thanks man I see what your sayin with the syllables, some
of the words I wanna use take up to much room lol but thanks for the feed back. I'm progessively trying to elevate and thats some thing I need to sort out. Upin 1~ |
NICE DROP, on there real dawg...
the flow is untouchable, im really feelin' this piece... |
Thanx for the feed back,,,... Up~ing
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