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Ambitious 02-12-04 07:25 AM

CV: Burnin Embers(response to sorry kids)
 
It's like a gas explotion over the vastest oceans...
Least thats what u see before ur casket closes
CV can easily trap wit with e-thug asshole potion...
Mr. dick web cam pimp goes to grab some lotion
The Realist always boastin, to big for his bridges....
2 pigs in the kitchen, trapt wit no heat frigid conditions
U speak & dont listen, internet geeks..really just bitches..
Act rough & vicious, but I only see a scrub and a pigeon!
I'm above your division, topical, text or even audio rhymes...
Miles ahead wit Sony spits, you come with Atari like lines!
Played out! your styles, lyrics, and even your names now...
You train?! wow!, fags punches pack soft hands and a :)!
Ring the alarm, I'm concerned theres been a securtiy breach...
The realist of harm, trapt in jail & like tears insecurity's leaked!
Made mistakes, but it's okay guys because God forgives you...
The herbish shit you pulled turned other mod's against you!
But the net respect is there, d/r's and aliases prepaired...
Cause goin into battle trapt by themselves they scared!
Can't handle the wear & tare nobody else dared to care...
But u ran ur mouths so it's only replying fair as I stare
It took ten minutes, sonned you both now my pens finished...
You start writin another diss I got another one replenished!
Bitchin bout votes & takin them away with an erratic edit...
& you dont vote on alot of shit you 2 are on babble credit!
Witty freeposting cool? in some cases go back to school....
Cause I know damn well C-section didnt teach these fools!
I'm just bein honest, you have to much time on ur hands....
I'm dope key-loads, u herbs the equivlent of a dime............
.................................................. ...............understand?
Sorry kids the fires still goin & I'm just brunin embers....
But Rb wants it's hype back so here let me return the members!

{Jihad} 02-12-04 07:35 AM

ILLness...Im feelin this...very aggresive, flow was water, and ya style is dope..

keep spittin fire..

peace
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Penskills 02-12-04 08:29 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ambitious
You train?! wow!, fags punches pack soft hands and a :)!

:laugh2: LMao...you had too many punches and personals for me to quote...LMao...very good diss...I figure you would come back at'em pretty strong and you did just that.I don't think this thing is over yet so...I'll be watching...LMAo...quit changing your fucking name!!!!

Trapt Wit 02-12-04 10:08 AM

Well you do know this means a diss is coming with me actually trying right?

You just started something you may not have wanted to

Mr.Christensen 02-12-04 11:21 AM

fair is fair, but that line about the 'dime' best not have been about a certain lady
if so...damn..

but good job, i think
personals were ehhh..but yea

ELEETE 02-12-04 12:00 PM

Damn................Dope Diss...........some funny lines in there!!

It took ten minutes, sonned you both now my pens finished...
You start writin another diss I got another one replenished!--HAHA

Good shit!! Very Aggresive!! An to the point!! You came back atem pretty hard.....much better than their piece.......Peace!!!

Ambitious 02-12-04 04:33 PM

Can't handle the wear & tare nobody else dared to care...
But u ran ur mouths so it's only replying fair as I stare

had to do it ...had to hold it down for cv .... oh an the dime line musta just been a co-incindence....funny tho now i see sum1's avy ;) ..
uppn this........

Induelz 02-12-04 04:42 PM

tis okay some high points good creative
nice disses good personals i see good
strucutre me liked!

Ambitious 02-12-04 05:54 PM

up. thanks

.Syck. 02-12-04 06:24 PM

It's like a gas explotion over the vastest oceans...
Least thats what u see before ur casket closes
CV can easily trap wit with e-thug asshole potion...
Mr. dick web cam pimp goes to grab some lotion
The Realist always boastin, to big for his bridges....
2 pigs in the kitchen, trapt wit no heat frigid conditions
U speak & dont listen, internet geeks..really just bitches..
Act rough & vicious, but I only see a scrub and a pigeon!
I'm above your division, topical, text or even audio rhymes...
Miles ahead wit Sony spits, you come with Atari like lines!
Played out! your styles, lyrics, and even your names now...
You train?! wow!, fags punches pack soft hands and a !


god damn son go easy on em.. quoted the opener cuz man u came out swinging, some beautiful multis some hard ass disses u defenietly got ur point across this woulda made hell of a battle verse.. good shit homy stay spittin em like this.. alotta bars but none of em fell off either

Dope Name 02-12-04 06:48 PM

like whoa...

Dope

'nough said

^word...

.Iknoevel. 02-12-04 07:01 PM

this was a dope diss... personals were everywhere, thoughout the whole verse... punches were good and this was a great diss... cant wait and see what they drop back

Ambitious 02-14-04 01:35 AM

upn.......

Wise Ways 02-14-04 08:19 PM

good diss..a few quotables
I liked tha smile line and tha pigion one
nice flow and good use of multies..
Overall...a nice read

Ambitious 02-15-04 12:05 PM

thanks uppn......


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