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Epic vs Thousand Miles
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting etc...the normal rules apply Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-29-04 at 04:25 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. DQ.. went over the limit |
aight get epic checked in buy the time set aight????
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Thousand Miles has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 04:02 AM.
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Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 04:06 AM.
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[CENTER]Kids walking "thousand miles" untill he reaches his downfall
he getting week from my punches cant walk so he crawl all tha way back up if hell ever make it kids gay like joe dirt he likes to see homos naked he's brain dead ill leave his mind vacant calling out Oreo Cuzz he says he's a cookie.... Kids not getting around me it's Rookie vs Rookie kids a mouse like mr Jingles from tha green mile.. get stepped all over like kitchen floor or tiles be carefull kid ya might get left with no wins punches come right and left so you meet tha twins kids about to get "thousand" losses before he starts youngin's only 14 he should be playing in parks this kid aint too smart.........[/CENTER] |
my fault exceeded tha limit i aint see that 10 line rule my fault
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don't worry about it.......................................
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lol you gone spit ya verse or not??
lemme know mayn |
kid aint gone spit huh dam mayn i post a verse for nothing times almost up
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here's ten...sorry i dropped late :(
shit...this guy making shit tenser than three somes i see this wack coward...i now want to be lonesome this wack kid couldn't rhyme...until he bited and theft U started out with nothing & still has most of it left watch me destroy you...i'll fucking crack your spleen In Las Vegas,U even lose money on condom machines fuck this...you're just gonna grow up to be a janitor you always wins...unless there is another competitor sorry to destroy your dream...well, you're just a pest don't worry...as a failure, this kid's a great success |
uppin for votes now!!!.................................
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uppin............................................. ................
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This was feedback posted for Thousand Miles
just checking youy shit out bro
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Upping On Votes Ppl Get At This Thing Right Here
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Voted For: Thousand Miles
got my vote epic-ok first off epic wrote wayy over the limit so you should automaticly lose for that....you had a horrible structure....flow was aiight not too good...punched were weak and just fell off i didnt like your verse to much...vocab was okay not too good....no multi's personals lacked horribly work on your punches make em more complex...even out your lines to fix your structure......make your personals hit harder...put multi's in to increase flow....and get better vocab overall 5/10 tho-okay you had humerous punches.....better vocab..you punches seemed to hit harder.....but you didnt have any personals....structure was better....vocab was better...you had a more complex verse i liked it it flowed good and you had a few multi's..good drop man over all 6/10 peace~1 return the favor, links in my sog...no hate pplz |
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