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Jonathon 04-05-07 11:59 PM

Mariah vs. Professor
 
Preseason Match-up!

Mariah vs Professor

Ok, This is a preseason match-up. This battle will not be counted on your regular season record. This is just a battle to get things started up a little before the actual season starts, and we would like it if you could show, but if you can't just let us know in your thread.

Checks Due: Friday April 611:59 P.M. CST
Verses Due: Saturday April 7, 11:59 P.M. CST
Voting Ends: Sunday April 8, 11:59 P.M. CST

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Rules & Regulations

Good Luck to Both!

Brandon Cee 04-06-07 03:13 AM

Fuck you bitches, giving me her

EDIT: MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAX HAHAHAXHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
:laugh2:

^^ find the diffrent letter!

Mariah 04-06-07 06:45 PM

yeah wtf? the letter is X btw

Mariah 04-07-07 06:03 AM

Life is half spent before we know what it is
-George Herbert-




The baroness wades, the water is too cold
While clarinets play their softer cued notes
Shrewed hopes, surpassed by worse pain
Disguising the hurt, masking up her face
Dead in a worse place, a jungle of emotion
Love, lust, greed; all a trouble with devotion
Her life will grow, give it time to command
Let this angel free, her wings die to expand
She reaches for the heavens, Earth has fell
Even with false facts, she can learn it well
Burn in hell, you fascist creeps, leave her be
This sucidal embodiment of our Lady Peace
Torch in one hand, the other holds the Word
We condemn man and yet we mold the Earth
So ask me a question, we live this propriety
Freedom isn't symbolized by statues
...freedom kills this society

Brandon Cee 04-07-07 06:55 AM



It's all in fun...
I acknowledge non-sense, this game means nothing
The track is just obvious and this train leaves bluffing
Mainly stuffing, my mind elates with that of a smoker
My heart pumps wild like it was a stack full of jokers
I'd fold, but I can't, there's one life to live and it's now
I planned on leaving here rich, quitting won't help out
But I'll let this go, I'm not the one to destine my fate
I've been given a hand, I won't be testin my strength



It's all in fun, but why not push it...
I tap down on the table, check, see what he does
He won't want to risk it, so he'll raise with a bluff
I press my luck hard, I would really like to finish
With some green in my pocket, I'm in it to win it
So I'm all in because I'm such a hardcore bidder
After a glance at my cards, can't be much better
I am confident I got this, if not, no big deal friends
Because this round's over, but they will deal again




It's all in fun, but I will die to win...
I see that I may have what I need, my limit broadens
No need to contemplate and so my bitching softens
I'll roulette this match too, I can win with those odds
And I see there's no need to play with most thoughts
I'll postpone the agony, and make my opponent shiver
And pretend my hand has no appeal, 'til after the river
So let's play, game on, 1 bullet, I spin it around then
But I fold and pull it back...hitting the ground...DEAD



But what did death do
Just lay me to down rest....and?
The gun was my rescue
Later realizing I had the best hand

Journal!st 04-07-07 07:09 AM

well mariah knows who ima gonna vote for....


brandon- your verse was cool man.. i liked it was creative and the pic thing you whore...lol..couldnt think of another way?!...lmfao anyways the content was cool though sometimes the story i was just not feeling it cus sometimes it felt sorta...lika....FORCED nah mean... your wording though is just throwin g me off cus it really isnt clikcing in some areas man damn...but your emotion was there aswell as your own vocab assortion.

Mariah- i liked your piece more cus it was just more eye catching was just more better...worded better and the content was good aswell as your vocabulary kept on pouring it was short..YES fuckin short but writing is writing and how ever you want it and think it may eefect its yours...lol.. but i liked your dorp more cus of your skill of writing with a story and wording and assorting your vocan so it wouldnt just feel forced it seemed rush yes,,,but it was a nice enough piece to take this win from me....

both did well though....and ugh both you fuckers are SEXY!


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