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The Never Ending Party
Talkin nonsense because its hard to stay-sober,
It's Point Blank sayin you just a gay-poser, Pantie's n Bra's everywhere when the days-over, I Kill ya dead, ya Still inbred so strip and let ya parents-in, You cant even walk straight and your a fuckin emberrassment, Meanwhile I'm in a different room wit this Old-Miss, Open her 'lips' wide and slip in the Whole-Fist, I can barely breathe feels like my lungs have no oxygen, Then I wake up The fuckin drunks been throwin Rocks-again, The end of it all go n get ya weed from the lost-n-found, Sorry lookin punks seemed to have been Tossed-around, Carpet be lookn like prehistoric fuckin fossiled-ground, I was hungover and decided to rap about partying, just a quick drop, id appreciate feedback though, peace |
ok piece for a quick drop.....
flo was a tad choppy....and increase the vocab... decent concept tho......... do me a favor an drop ur thoughts on the monkey dream thanks and keep postin....pc*1* |
thanks for the feedback bro,
ill definetly check out your monkey dream. lol. peace |
some more feedback please
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uppin for feedback
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