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LPMNDCTE 08-27-09 04:47 PM

Fly-E vs LPMNDCTE
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-09 at 04:47 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-27-09 04:48 PM

LPMNDCTE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-09 04:48 PM.

System 08-27-09 11:13 PM

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-09 11:13 PM.

Fly-E 08-28-09 12:14 AM

Everything with periods around it is what the letters stand for and the stories behind them...Lets get it. Good luck fam.And im considerin that all one line shoot me i said it wit one breathe lol.


L.P.M.N.D.C.T.E....Let me tell you guys what that means

Its .Like. .postpartum. depression,

.Likes. .mens. circumcision sessions,

.licks. .nipples. is an obsession,

.likes. .dick. riding as profession,

.confession. of his .conception. .complextion. of a girl doc made a .correction.,

.likes. .tight. gay ass without protection,

.lookin. at fly-e with a massive .erection.

No need to hade the facts, rhymes leavin ya constricted, restriced, causin pain self-inflicted

No need to hide in the back, sonic snitched you out so i lifted the truth you aint admitted

Your equal to a fetus born in a fetal postion without a circumcission till scissors are on ur dick and slippin....ouchh

people lookin at you threw a peep hole seein my evil hangin you from a steeple on top of a cathedral

LP aint nothin i defined him and what i'll do to him, i'll commit sins on ur limbs and when they break repeat it again.

quick shit good luck.

LPMNDCTE 08-28-09 03:54 AM

RV knows I got this...anything you post's a tragedy
this battle being a toss up defies the laws of gravity
cuz the keys u'll dent mutants...& the movies been out
but u taking up X-causes is like seeing Wolverine sit out
so the record speaks for itself...1 n 0, view it clown
yours talks so much broken english thought ur new in town
& ya boyfriends a musty man...how prison life working?
only essay you'll write behind bars will be a gang version
dont take many words to declare how I bend you spine back
the leagues are gone now, & your verses arent far behind that

Fly-E 08-28-09 06:28 PM

Uppin there are only two battles on this site lets vote em and be done.

M&rk 09-10-09 06:18 PM

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

ummm fly- e. what the fuck was that shit. LP, your first and last bars were good, the rest was filler, but didn't really matter. i would of gave it to you just for the first punch

vote- LP

Brydon 09-12-09 08:53 PM

This was feedback posted for Fly-E
 
polls.............................................

technique 09-20-09 09:35 PM

Voted For: Fly-E

i like dis verse came across alot harder and i like the way it was layed out... i just think the punchlines connected really well so dat is why im voting for this both pretty good but i just like dis better... other was good though

M&rk 09-21-09 12:48 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Technique
Voted For: Fly-E

i like dis verse came across alot harder and i like the way it was layed out... i just think the punchlines connected really well so dat is why im voting for this both pretty good but i just like dis better... other was good though

You need to be banned from this site for thinking fly-e won this battle.

Fly-E 09-21-09 10:52 PM

Dawwg its a battle stop takin it serious lol^^^ get the fuck outta here.
32-23 thats not to impressive to be talkin shit right nowlll

Retribution 09-24-09 02:51 AM

This was feedback posted for Fly-E
 
Good play on the name i like that you had good structure kept everything in order...kept the same rhyme almost through out the whole battle good punches and wordplay.....kept the battle clean one thing i dont like is the last line....not really a fan of it i like the fetus line the that was pretty good there.........some what original



LP
Alright sounded good actually but not enough to knock your opponent out of the win ya see you had some decent lines in there punches didn't really hit to hard not alot of wordplay.....decent structure and all rhymes was kind of basic stuff nothing to impressive but for the most part it was alirght but i got to give this one to Fly e.....

upfront 09-25-09 02:33 AM

Voted For: Fly-E

fly e gets my vote didnt quite get the period letter thing but ur verse flowed alot bettter and ur vocab was straight other bull just couldnt find the flow no metas no hard hittin shit all love no hatin fly e gets my vote

fly e

Its CJ 10-03-09 09:16 PM

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 
just looking........................................... .....

Fly-E 11-05-09 11:48 AM

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