Achilles vs Chief
 

Battle Rules:

8 lines ONLY
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Wateva, Wateva....


do ya thing homie :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-21-05 at 09:10 PM

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Achilles has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-05 10:12 PM.

Chief has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-05 10:04 AM.

damn u really EXPLAINED everythin, nice tho no hate...vote up

This was feedback posted for Chief
 

you tried too hard...










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aha............................................... ....vote up

lmao okay homie now u gettin outta hand....vote up

Voted For: Achilles

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Voted For: Chief

Achilles- Your verse man, not too bad you had some creative wordplay and personals...all though i feel your punches lacked the overalll toughness...gotta come harder than that....but overall 6/10
BEST LINES: nah i wont stop its real talk, my shots hit son my aims real sharp
and u wont start, being a "crhyminal" cuz of a jersey u bought!

Chief-You had some dope parts in your verse...good personals and punches...wordplay was pretty dope...had off structure ...but still went to gether well and overall you had an 8/10

BEST LINES:
This next punch is “PC” terms, you claim to be black but you whiter than the uniforms worn by nurses
Looks like I hurt the kid, have a new alias, so let’s all call him “giga”, why?, ’cause “giga” bytes verses

v/chief

rtf in sig within 48 hours or say bye to this vote...1

Voted For: Chief

achilles-your verse was iight, you had some good attempts at wordplays and punches, i think you had some corny asss lines yo you gotta come more creative and take time and do good your personals where there but lacking in overall skill. overall 6/10

chief-your verse was good, your structure through me off a bit but other than that you had some good punches...your personals were thoughrully explained....but thats annoying....try to word it better so you dont have to explain them....your verse was by far overall 7/10

v/chief

Voted For: Chief

good battle to both of you nice to see ur text battles chief pretty good to both of you jsut showing luv upppppppppppppppppppp

oops i meant feedback one of u get thsi removed please lol : / i apolagize

Voted For: Achilles

Sheif
1st bar-Stretched the fuck out.So many unnecessary shit in there.Punch was weak.
2nd bar-The 1st line with the Cd 'n shit is played out.And the lego thing was decent.
3rd bar-1st line was direct filler.And 2nd line,you saud "gettin a home"?..I'm sorry,but that is weird.If that's you trying to say that he's poor..it didn't work.There are normal people who can't buy a home and it's not because of them being poor.BUT,the concept with sherlock holmes/homes could have worked..if you had worded it better.
4th bar-WOW,this was stretched out.Flow was horrible.Punch,again,could have worked with better wording.


Achilles
1st bar-Forced wordplay.Sheet sound absolutely nothing like sheif.
2nd bar-AAh...decent punch.Nothing spectacular.
3rd bar-Weak...didn't really make much sense neither
4th bar-Good personal...try not to put links in battles anymore..but ok..


Ok...I gotta go withachilles in this battle.He was direct and straight to the point with his verse.Sheif tried waay to hard in this battle.

Vote-Achilles

chea get it removed then @ will......uppin for da votes