Intangible vs Desipio
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-13-08 at 07:39 AM

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Intangible has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-08 07:40 AM.

Desipio has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-12-08 07:43 AM.

i come with hard rhymes n punchlines, you better take measures
you wanna be husslin? you cant even deal with the pressure
while my style is forever, you better get it right man
i beat you to pulp with a firepook and litteraly make you white trash
my lines are to complicated for you to understand bitch
its like laid, you just cant get it
forget it, im the playa who's balling your sister dead
while you cant even come close if you jerk of under your sisters bed
my shit is fat, so what the fuck why would i hesitate
to smoke someone who thinks he can go heads up with a fraggrenade
not even trying.. if you wanna battle me in rap, you're wasted
cause you even get smoked by astmapatients

That's right I'ma Ball out and buy a rose basket for you//
But unlike the callout, this finna be a closed casket dude//

I got the ratchet too, I'm bout to leave this snitches game in a blunder//
Rockin' WNBA Jerseys only time you get a bitches name and number//

Your games in a slumber, Smell the coffee and open ya bum peepers//
I'm bout to sneak up on Smoke and slam him, like I was some Kreeper//

I'm more of a Reaper, the keeper of this game, and I got it locked//
Listen 'Cheech', I hope you have 'Nice Dreams', when the 'doc leavin you Shocked'//*

Fuck your bite punches, my smite crunches this joke//
Cause honestly 'Smokes gettin blown out' and I ain't lightin a Toke//

Expo
* - In Nice Dreams, Cheech & Chong had a doc making some new kind of electrical current ganj.

Voted For: Intangible

wasnt really feeling this battle so im not going to break it down..
the only decent bar in the whole thing was
I got the ratchet too, I'm bout to leave this snitches game in a blunder//
Rockin' WNBA Jerseys only time you get a bitches name and number// and it wasnt really that tight.
both of you need to work on your personals and actuall disses.

i made that in like 5 minutes bc i forgot that i set it for a short deadline soo it was rushed

This was feedback posted for Intangible
 

Intangiable is fucking horrible

so are u lol i ripped u just accept the battle and u cansee what i wrote bitch made

jeah made it in 5 or 10 minutes also
but i normally dont do english battles so i thought it was a good start

that shit is so fucking true, this kid has got to be the WORST thing on the site. :shocked:

i fucking bite as in a question ur maken ur self look fucken dumb!

did you just say you bite?? dude that sucks

honestly u still suck soo why are u on rv u dnt battle u just talk shit e-gangster...
just leave the site or accept my battle u fuckin need to man up
and stop playing wit ur clit

why are you on the site, dont you just cheat?? yep.