REDZONE- the sky is falling (GOTTA PEEP) drop links!!!!
 

replied to enstinkz henessy track n the oyd joint.. fvck gettin tha links yall trust me right?

lol.. it's been a minute since i been on this site but i figured i'd stop in n drop sum recent work. this new joint my group just finished.. its kinda an experimental track, like a cross breed of hiphop/ alternative rock/ n attempted singin ha haa.. nah ferreal we needed a possitive vibe joint to try n push on the radio so we came up with this.. tryin to get sum feed on this one.. u can peep it on these links at tha bottom... order is omen, ceez, n mdeezie, n omen on tha hook. hopefully yall will enjoy this one. holla at me!!!

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6812944

WWW.MYSPACE.COM/OMENPAGE

damn yo now i remember y i havent been here in a minute.. cuz no one go'es here n e more

^LOL.

The hook fits... the only part I didn't like was the word 'porch' it sounds off. Okay so I guess that's not the hook, just an intro. Not bad. Would prolly work better as a chorus. Something in your voice sounds off (with the tone). Overall, I like the vibe to the track, just sounds like something missing but at around 1 58 it picks up again. Just looking for some consistency. I like different, experimental tracks. Good luck with this.

the singin needs some work....you can sorta tell its hesitant....like you hit notes but it has no real emotion cuz you were prolly focusing too much on hitting the notes....

you get into the verse, and then it becomes flawless....

i agree with the lack of feed/no one caring on this site....its why i only come back every now n then....


the production is nice on this.....i can tell you put alot of energy in this to make it just right....


only real problem i have, is the explosion....sounds to muffled and fake....just look up a better sound bit for that one man....


this is some good shit, if you got some free time id like to hop on a song....

ima up some old shit so you can peep n shit

word thats wassup hit me up