Paynimo ||vs|| Ja'e Roc
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due in 20 minutes after checkin no crew no hate no dickrydin gluck no feeding |
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i slap a queer quick detach ligemants and where organs for bling....
i'm endin ya STING your not FIT TO WIN like YOKOSUNA returning to the ring~/~ ready to spray i'm letting this kid lay on the PAVE ak Feeding ya ANTRE returning for seconds i'm stuffin this kid with more punches the whitneys resume~/~ switch slippin a win threw fingers your gasping when i'm slittin ya face....... detach and replace hand you your heart just to give you a grasp on ya FATE~/~ pay slays a virgin WINNER add number five to your LOSE COLLOM.... your over wieghed with a burden like lean challenged People trying to SHLALOM~/~ FINISH rippin with ease i'm rappin with no vasoline this kids BOUND to FALL..... i'm astounding all but your only masking up when your mom drags you to MASCARA BALLS~/~ get off me |
u style for free, no fee, so whos a pay nimo, so you gets no denero,
1 big fat zero, far from a hero, wake ass ava, please save tha, jokes for ya flow, oh no, i forgot son, you gots none, plain and simple, be your spit, cute wit a dimple, but still ain't shit, even wit dre, an em, on ya team, you couldnt make a hit, yai mean, no pro, scared to let every body know, lyrically ya broke, only heat ya pack is a smoke seventh line, this here battle is mine, u've been declined, better yet rewind, save ya status, you aint near the badest, lyrically not inclined, so y waste our time, this south paw switch up, you bout to get a stitch up, on ya eyes, shoulda reconized, an relized, the size, knew it wasnt wise, n hay yo parental descrition is advised. |
aiight uppin for votes people................................(1)
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uppin for some votes............................................. ............................(2)
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Punches-Ja'e Roc
Multies-Ja'e Roc Flow-Ja'e Roc Vocabulary-ÞAÝÑîMØ Overall- ÞAÝÑîMØ= 49/100 Ja'e Roc= 74/100 Ja'e Roc had more things to say and it rhymed and the majority of them were punches, also he had a better flowing verse than you ÞAÝÑîMØ, thats why he won and thats why you got a low score. |
LMAO^^^^^^^lol aiight lol to bad you can't poll homie lol........uppin (3)
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ayo this shit is ridiculous here its been up all day and we only got one bullshit non poll vote........changes need to be made
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