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The Creator 05-05-06 05:27 PM

Raw King vs Reed
 
Battle Rules:

6 minimum- 16 lines maximum
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-08-06 at 05:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-05-06 05:55 PM

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-05-06 05:55 PM.

The Creator 05-05-06 06:02 PM

U a pussy...I'll string u by ur tampax and take off 9 lives....
leave u paralyzed in a hospital bed...Mr.Reeds can die twice...
u must not like life...I choke u by ur white mikes...and kill u while u air-Jordan....
that's as close as u get to the best...unless u open a "Raw King's the shit" Forum....
U must not wanna battle...or even live life anymore....
I'm the reason why u say shit like
Quote:
Originally Posted by Reed
I never set up a battles here before

cuz I'm that ill...and when my verse drop...this whole sites in awe....
this nigga catches writers block...but I'll put his ghostwriters life on pause...
and I'll stash ur little body away...like u did ur stats....
tilt ur neck to an angle....like I do my FL fitted hats...

explanation...
1. self explanatory
2. Christopher Reeds(R.I.P.) already died once
3. pick him hung by the laces wit his legs out like Jordan on the logo.
4. me saying he wont get close to the best(someone like MJ) unless he makes a forum about me.
5.yeah.
6. just a lil some thing I quoted him saying
last line....I tilt my fucking hat like a g homie.

holla at ya boy.

System 05-05-06 06:19 PM

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-05-06 06:19 PM.

System 05-05-06 07:40 PM

Reed has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-05-06 07:40 PM.

Reed 05-05-06 09:23 PM

.50 cal chrome to yo dirty foul dome
Got this bitch wishin' that he would'da stayed home
Caught him after work and this niggaz all alone
Supposed ta of been a "King" but cant defend his throne
So I start rapein this this nigga like'a fuckin porno
I stick my cock in his mouth
Pop a wad and Im out
Bitch now whos the fuckin king of the south
This guy is on the ground after getting pound'
I feel like tha best heavy wieght champ pound 4 pound
Yall fuckin wit me I aint fuckin wiff you allz
I leave niggaz raped like fag episodes of oz
My raps are unorthadox and somthing to fear
You can call me gay but your still gettin beat by a queer

The Creator 05-08-06 11:47 AM

lets get some votes in here please...................

The Creator 05-08-06 04:33 PM

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Ziq 05-08-06 04:37 PM

Voted For: Raw King

Dont explain your verse Raw,

Raw came harder and each line was like disswing Reed in a way. Reed was telling a friken story how he mugged Raw. Raw actually punched.

v/ Raw King

The Creator 05-08-06 04:41 PM

I know its annoying but some people actually request that shit. but thanks for the vote.

M&rk 05-09-06 03:15 AM

Voted For: Raw King

and I'll stash ur little body away...like u did ur stats....
tilt ur neck to an angle....like I do my FL fitted hats...
^^this was decent but usin like to compare is wack in text
u must not like life...I choke u by ur white mikes...and kill u while u air-Jordan....
that's as close as u get to the best...unless u open a "Raw King's the shit
^^closes u get lines are played enless u flip 'em really good, and u didn't, but almost had another sub par line
vs.
nother

vote- raw for one almost ok line

M&rk 05-09-06 03:15 AM

also using explination for lines is really wack, your bars should explain themselves

The Creator 05-09-06 11:55 AM

thanks for the vote...I didn't really understand some of the shit u put down but thanks anyways.

The Creator 05-10-06 12:18 PM

..............uppin for votes............................

Valerie 05-10-06 06:16 PM

This was feedback posted for Raw King
 
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