.Barz Of Steel. vs BIG Spook
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0=KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 12:46 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 12:47 AM.

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 03:32 PM.

check it...

Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2

GOOD LUCK

uppin............................................. ....................

Lets Get Some Votes On this bitch!!!!!!!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"

lmao...7/10

Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"

good...7/10

You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!

damn...thats just mean:(...9/10

Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"

nice...8/10

All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" *

genius...10/10

barz...u really ripped it on this 1...nothing less than wut id expect from u...theres really not much i can tell u to improve on...so keep droppin...41/50



SPOOK...
Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame

played as fuck...3/10

cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances

gay...no fillers in battle verse :nono:...0/10

ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt

again...no self glorification or fillers...0/10

dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination

doesnt make sense...2/10

that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2

ok...5/10

u need work on wordplay...structure...punches especially...and metas...keep workin on it...10/50

1-0 iight thanx for the vote uppin this shit

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
3/10...No Comment
cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
3/10...You Comin Weak, & You Talkin About Yaself More Than Bars
ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
1/10...Weak Lines
dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
1/10...Had No Real Meanin You Jus Tried 2 Rhyme
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
2/10...1st Line Stretched As Fuck, 2nd Not Worded Well


This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"
5/10....Heard Diff Lines Thats Similiar So Nothin New 2 Me
Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"
6.5/10...Nice Play On His Name
You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!
7/10...Good Personal
Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"
7/10...Anotha Tight Line
All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns"
6.5/10....Clever But Worded Funni


Punches: Bars
Personals: Neitha
Creativity: Bars
Structure: Neitha
Multiples: Neitha
Wordplay: Bars
Enjoyment: Bars

OVERALL VOTE: .Bars Of Steel.


RTF....In My Battle Wit NewKid

Drop a link and I will RTF (Ackrite)

Uppin This Fucking Shit!!!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"
^ alright 7/10
Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"
^alrght 7/10
You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!
^Basic 6/10
Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"
^Umm 6.5/10
All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" *
^Nice closer 7.5/10
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Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
^Weak 5/10
cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
^Weak Also 5/10
ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
^??5/10
dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
^Weak Punch 5/10
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
^Weak 5/10
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Barz Took This Battle Due To HAVIN PUNCHES N personalz n havin everything a Battlez Requested!BIG SPOOK homie you need to work on EVERYTHING!(Punches,Wordplay,Metaz,Personalz,Rhymi n Scheme)
i seen You Tried Usin Some VOCAB just didnt do good!Prolly cuz you didnt really make sense of what you said!but my vote goes to!..
VOTE=BARZ
Punches=Barz
Personalz=Barz
Structure=Barz
Opener=barz
Close=Barz
Do i Need to proceed...??no i dont think so homie!RTF in my Battle with E.C if you havent!HOLLA BACK ATCHA BOY!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194585
^^^link

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles
^^^best punch... nice concept, somethin new... this punch alone would of won the battle for you... i like this and your last bar was decent... the rest were either too basic or played... but decent drop

spook-
that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
^^
i think this was an attempt at wordplay so i see u might know how to do it, add more to your verse wit punches and you'll be on a better track...
think of a diss while havin having their name in in your head at the same time like...
this kids soft wack and plane, needs to add somethin gangsta to his game
cuz the last time he had a bar that was hard was when he wrote his name

Iight Thanx Uppin This Fucking Shit...

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"
^decent flow, ok pun

Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"
^nyce personal, good metta

You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!
^nyce wordplay & good personal

Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"
^nah not feeling da concept

All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" *
^good wordplay, culd ov used da ending punchline alot better

Good verse here dawg, nyce flow throughout, few good personalz in yo verse. poretty decent wordplay throughout, punbches were nuthin special but u certainly did enough 2 get diz win, hands down, really good job..


Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
^self glory, very weak second line

cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
^baarely even a diss, u on sum freestyle shit, think through ur disses

ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
^very weak again

dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
^probably ur best bar, styll wasnt nyce tho

that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
^first line wuz 2 short, 2nd line wuz 2 stretch, not a good personal

Very weak verse, u had no wordplay ithin ur rhymes, punches were non-existant, & u came very basic wit ur flow, all rhymes dat i seen b4 juz worded diffrently, nuthin at all on a personal level, step ur rap game up dawg, u on sum lil jon rhyme scheme lol

Vote-BARZ OF STEEL, EZ WIN...SELF EXPLANATORY IN FACT LOL

rtf, vote honestly & explain it plz. links in da signature