YET ANOTHER JOINT FROM THE SPULSTER!! "Gimme That" ft. Chris Brown ~_~
 

word, just did some quick shit to this cuz I felt like doing it. iunno. I just like Chris Brown's shit don't hate. lmao :shoot:

but umm yea....

Intro: some dude
First verse: Chris Brown
Hook: Chris Brown
Second verse: Chris Brown
Third verse: SPuL
Outro: Chris Brown

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219955
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219905

whoever's singin in the beginning is nice with his- sounds mad radioish, reminds me of a dude singin destiny's child, not my type of shit, but definately radioish. the emcee... I suppose is you, kinda takes away from the track just cuz the singin was so good, If you rehearsed that shit a while, and re-wrote a couple bars it could really make this a pop radio worthy song... 1

listning...............................

beats ight dont really like cris brown though.....................

notgonna leave feed on his verse.................

spul..............

nice floww on this u seen to werk on these jointz......

lyrics was hott chess lines were good...............

delievery was nice as usually...........

qualityz pretty good too.............

cant really say much more itwas short good drop though rtf
on me and unfs new track

Feed used 1/22/06 "Im So Fly>>>>>>>>RemiXed>>>>>>>>>>>New Shit With Trakk Starr!!!!!"

Beat: tight

Quality: good

Delivery: good for this track

Flow: nice, right on beat

Lyrics: good

overall, pretty dope


I was kinda waitin for ur verse, took awhile but i found out its because it wa sat the end...i didnt read ur message...lmfao

ur did good on this joint...really feelin it

keep it up

^lol hahaa.......

thanks to all 3 of you for feed. RTF. upping.........

lol im starting to think you have a fetish thing for Chris Brown.. this is the third song spul .....NO MORE lol..


chris brown is decent.. theres better singers i know lol..

lol at that damn smoke detector..

yea.. i agree wit seven.. its good.. only word i would change is when you say " I just swoop in and take it" change it to shit.. sometimes you gotta cuss to make it go.. in this case it would be a pretty good line with it..

good drop tho..i really like how you commin out now spully.. *tears up*

LOOL

Chris brown again...hes dope though:)

I really liked this,your flow was on point all the way through
Delivery was nice,i felt the way you used the beat

Like you were rapin it with your smooth flow lol

Emotion was koo

your presence was exellent

Overall:
8/10

lol at mad who is that signing lol
thats chris brown foe
lol
ok waiting for u to come in :(
thsi song is soooooooooo repetative spul come in already
omg i dotn liek ti already
this ugggh its spul! shit needs to end
flow is kid of boring same old spul too many adlibs with the ugggh
liked the ending of ur verse
the beggining jsut ruined it for me

^lol haha, it's coo..

thanks to all for feed tho. upp

oh boy...spul wit another chris brown remix......man u gon fuck around an get sued lmao....but anyways everyone likes chris shit an I am no exception he def sings his ass off on this shit....ok ya quality is def better...however I heard sum of ya early dubs being slightly off.....but yea the rap does kinda take song down..cuz energy doesn't seem to match....an the quality difference is def noticeable..flow was koo tho....delivery coulda been stronger lyrically no probs.....STOP WIT THE CHRIS BROWN REMIXES!!!!!more solo shit spul...lol..ah'ight fam be ez.......1

^word thanks for feed yo

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Listening...

Beat is cool...

I will just leave feed for your verse...

Flow is pretty nice...I'm feelin it. Lyrics are pretty good. Delivery is lacking a bit...seems like your talking quiet or something, but it's straight.

Good track.

Keep it up.

RTF Please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220061

^aiight I got you when i come back home. uppppp

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