Kirk vs SnoCap
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-09 at 11:39 PM

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SnoCap has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-09 11:44 PM.

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-09 11:20 PM.

I'll leave you 0-3 like strike outs,face it man...
When i'm hangin K like a fuckin baseball fan!!
my lines anchor gigs so i can vanquish wigs...
This anxious kid good for nothing like a pancreaus!!
This fool boast now? He must not know i roast clowns...
Beat em in the first round cuz My IQ higher than his post count!!
I'm hostile, you'll topple if you catch my drift like plankton...
He gospel, "imagine me" rippin up kirk franklin!
Wanna talk about my sig better come wit a dominate flip...
need new paper? how he hate on X-men but just a comic strip!!
Slash ya wrists if you suicidal, or stick the knife through ya chest
Cuz fuckin wit me is slittin ya neck... i'ma cut above the rest!!
you messin wit a beast, ya flesh is fresh or just deceased?
da best in speach, at least wit ya death we rest in peace!
Adam helpin em with words, So i spit first to get this kid hurt
when feeling grim, im steelin wins like pittsburgh

:) whatever you do, dont use a "piss on sno... hes yellow line" :)

umm, do i win or do you get to post your verse whenever you want?

why you gon set up a battle and not even drop? thats real fake homie.

I guess I'll start right here...

When it comes to this battle, bro. I'm countin' you out, dude,
Cause whenever Snow drops, theres always 20 dudes comin' to plow you,
I'm so hot that this bitch melts when I approach the ring,
It just feels weird walkin' all over Snow so close to spring,
I'll shovel your ass for a quick buck. You ain't pimpin', don't you see?
Cause I ain't never met a bitch that would blow Snow for free,
And since were on the subject, bro. Don't tell me this ones wrong,
Cause we know even his bitch refuses to touch Snow without gloves on,
And speaking of her... Serious note, son. Your girl is a fuckin' fat chub,
And as for Cap's size? She does exactly that every time shes in the bathtub,
In this battle I'm winnin', son. We all know that goodwill overcome,
You're just stoked that thats the same place you bought your clothes from,
This dude is a comic book nerd. And I'd say hes wasted,
Cause even without your sig., its clear you Watchmen on a daily basis,
Silly faggot, we all know that all your rhymes are weak as fuck,
Thats why this bar isn't a punch. I'm just leaving to get Pizza Hut.

Such a waste of time.

Voted For: SnoCap

Ok kirk i no where you was comin from both had decent verses but kirk you had alot of syllables watch that because i don't make it interestin at least if you do that than throw some wordplay in with it or a personal like somethin true. But snocap flowed nice i like a few punches alot for example

"my lines anchor gigs so i can vanquish wigs...
This anxious kid good for nothing like a pancreaus!!"

got me laughin so overall you had a better verse you get my vote.

Voted For: Kirk

I'll leave you 0-3 like strike outs,face it man...
When i'm hangin K like a fuckin baseball fan!!
played as fuck. I used something similar back in 06 against Kryptikal on RB, and it was called played. So imagine now
my lines anchor gigs so i can vanquish wigs...
This anxious kid good for nothing like a pancreaus!!
too simple. Not hard hitting
This fool boast now? He must not know i roast clowns...
Beat em in the first round cuz My IQ higher than his post count!!
blah. Self hype. This is a battle.
I'm hostile, you'll topple if you catch my drift like plankton...
He gospel, "imagine me" rippin up kirk franklin!
Could have had something. But worded too simple.
Wanna talk about my sig better come wit a dominate flip...
need new paper? how he hate on X-men but just a comic strip!!
Ehh decent
Slash ya wrists if you suicidal, or stick the knife through ya chest
Cuz fuckin wit me is slittin ya neck... i'ma cut above the rest!!
Good thought.... but played as fuck
you messin wit a beast, ya flesh is fresh or just deceased?
da best in speach, at least wit ya death we rest in peace!
again. nothing
Adam helpin em with words, So i spit first to get this kid hurt
when feeling grim, im steelin wins like pittsburgh
wow... played again

With all that talk. I thought you’d actually bring something. Instead half of your verse is played or played to death. And the ones that weren’t were just statements. Get more creative. Work on fresher concepts. and work on that wordplay.

KIRK

When it comes to this battle, bro. I'm countin' you out, dude,
Cause whenever Snow drops, theres always 20 dudes comin' to plow you,
concept was coo... ok
I'm so hot that this bitch melts when I approach the ring,
It just feels weird walkin' all over Snow so close to spring,
LOL liked this. But that’s two straight sno/snow nameplays
I'll shovel your ass for a quick buck. You ain't pimpin', don't you see?
Cause I ain't never met a bitch that would blow Snow for free,
blah enough with the snow nameplays. lol this was ok tho
And since were on the subject, bro. Don't tell me this ones wrong,
Cause we know even his bitch refuses to touch Snow without gloves on,
haha i liked it. But again, getting way too repititive
And speaking of her... Serious note, son. Your girl is a fuckin' fat chub,
And as for Cap's size? She does exactly that every time shes in the bathtub,
haha good
In this battle I'm winnin', son. We all know that goodwill overcome,
You're just stoked that thats the same place you bought your clothes from,
nah pretty played concept
This dude is a comic book nerd. And I'd say hes wasted,
Cause even without your sig., its clear you Watchmen on a daily basis,
nah when trailers first came out. RBL was full of same shit. Played
Silly faggot, we all know that all your rhymes are weak as fuck,
Thats why this bar isn't a punch. I'm just leaving to get Pizza Hut.
decent

Overall, seems like you knew you didn’t need to bring much. Wasn’t your best shit. Although you had some nice snow plays. But seriously you had like 5 or 6. Calm down with that son! lol I mean sometimes too many nameplays are bad to use, but it can get by. But when the nameplays involve using the same wordplay, then 2 is pushing it, but you used like 4 or 5 lol. The walking on snow spring line won it for me. I liked that. shit was ill.

Overall tho, Kirk got this hands down.

v/Kirk

Voted For: Kirk

SnoCap
I'll leave you 0-3 like strike outs,face it man...
When i'm hangin K like a fuckin baseball fan!!
Alright concept, didn't execute it that well.
my lines anchor gigs so i can vanquish wigs...
This anxious kid good for nothing like a pancreaus!!
This was weak.
This fool boast now? He must not know i roast clowns...
Beat em in the first round cuz My IQ higher than his post count!!
Lame, you've been saying post count stuff to everybody all week.
I'm hostile, you'll topple if you catch my drift like plankton...
He gospel, "imagine me" rippin up kirk franklin!
No.
Wanna talk about my sig better come wit a dominate flip...
need new paper? how he hate on X-men but just a comic strip!!
Lame.
Slash ya wrists if you suicidal, or stick the knife through ya chest
Cuz fuckin wit me is slittin ya neck... i'ma cut above the rest!!
Self Glorification lines are not punches.
you messin wit a beast, ya flesh is fresh or just deceased?
da best in speach, at least wit ya death we rest in peace!
Over multiying and not a good punch.
Adam helpin em with words, So i spit first to get this kid hurt
when feeling grim, im steelin wins like pittsburgh
Blah, the idea is sort of meh, not used that well either.

VS.

Kirk
When it comes to this battle, bro. I'm countin' you out, dude,
Cause whenever Snow drops, theres always 20 dudes comin' to plow you,
This was funny as fuck.
I'm so hot that this bitch melts when I approach the ring,
It just feels weird walkin' all over Snow so close to spring,
Good idea, so so punch.
I'll shovel your ass for a quick buck. You ain't pimpin', don't you see?
Cause I ain't never met a bitch that would blow Snow for free,
Hahaha, not bad.
And since were on the subject, bro. Don't tell me this ones wrong,
Cause we know even his bitch refuses to touch Snow without gloves on,
Lmfao.
And speaking of her... Serious note, son. Your girl is a fuckin' fat chub,
And as for Cap's size? She does exactly that every time shes in the bathtub,
Lol, word.
In this battle I'm winnin', son. We all know that goodwill overcome,
You're just stoked that thats the same place you bought your clothes from,
Blah, alright.
This dude is a comic book nerd. And I'd say hes wasted,
Cause even without your sig., its clear you Watchmen on a daily basis,
Hahahahahahaha, owned.
Silly faggot, we all know that all your rhymes are weak as fuck,
Thats why this bar isn't a punch. I'm just leaving to get Pizza Hut.
This is retarded, but using a last bar really wasn't necessary.

Well I think this one speaks for itself,

Vote: Kirk

Voted For: Kirk

Kirk:

When it comes to this battle, bro. I'm countin' you out, dude,
Cause whenever Snow drops, theres always 20 dudes comin' to plow you,
I'm so hot that this bitch melts when I approach the ring,
It just feels weird walkin' all over Snow so close to spring,
And since were on the subject, bro. Don't tell me this ones wrong,
Cause we know even his bitch refuses to touch Snow without gloves on,
Silly faggot, we all know that all your rhymes are weak as fuck,
Thats why this bar isn't a punch. I'm just leaving to get Pizza Hut.

vs

SnoCap:
This fool boast now? He must not know i roast clowns...
Beat em in the first round cuz My IQ higher than his post count!!
Wanna talk about my sig better come wit a dominate flip...
need new paper? how he hate on X-men but just a comic strip!!

this was a alright battle, i have to give this to Kirk for a few more good punches.

Voted For: SnoCap

Pretty good battle.

Sno: you definitely had some good multis, your punches were pretty original. Your flow was good. That Kirk Franklin line was pretty nice. I was really feeling the rest in peace line also. One thing you should work on though is personals, I didn't really see any, unless you want to count your first bar as a personal.


Kirk:
Overall: I felt you both focused more on self-glorifying than actual punchlines. Both had good flow, but felt Snocap came a bit more original. Close battle though, could go either way. No hate to either.

V/ SnoCap

I love how that cut off my explaination. how the fuck did that happen? Anyways this is what I put:


Pretty good battle.

Sno: you definitely had some good multis, your punches were pretty original. Your flow was good. That Kirk Franklin line was pretty nice. I was really feeling the rest in peace line also. One thing you should work on though is personals, I didn't really see any, unless you want to count your first bar as a personal.


Kirk:
Overall: I felt you both focused more on self-glorifying than actual punchlines. Both had good flow, but felt Snocap came a bit more original. Close battle though, could go either way. No hate to either.

V/ SnoCap


Fucking rapverse shit.

Voted For: Kirk

better verse, better structure, sum sick disses... how ever i think this is jus average for sum1 of your quality...Maybe u knew all u needed was to go half speed maybe i dunno.
No hate sno jus wastnt feelin ur verse.

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