B.X.P vs ak-mixa
 

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Bitch X-rated will get wrecked by my lyrical crane
B.X.P. ya da dragon and soon to become da slain
I'm a ghost beating dis emcee and hauntin him wit visions
see him pop like toast and smoked by my snipin precision
I'll clown and taunt ya with my dick not da birdy
so I can fuck ya flow horizontal or topsy turvy
sunscreen cant protect ya from my fiery rhymes
300 degrees dat will sunburn ya or char ya spine
ya joining da navy is da only way you'll get a crew
he probably hates me, but dis nut's full of lose screws

Hes From Tennessee a country singer from Nashville
A redneck from Down South workin at those farm mills
I heard nashville's road signs and transvestites is a big concern
When you found out you prefered guys U-TURNED
This kid is too young to see a movie that X-Rated
Been here since December and still havent elevated
Pathetic whack emcee and no need to try hard
Im trying to be personal but i cant find your avatar
So let this let this last line be simple and clear
He couldnt be hot if he was in the Earths Atmosphere

i guess i have a verse error
on the last bar it should say

So let this last line be simple and clear
He couldnt be hot if he was in the Earths Atmosphere

uppin dont sleep on this battle...................

uppin....dont sleep on this battle will return the favor

uppin dont sleep on this
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Both yall was on par with the structure, I think the flow went to BXP though...he was on point there. LoL he said im trying to get personal but i cant find ya avatar. The gay jokes are kinda played, but the way you used em was creative. I did like the way you were ending the last bar AK but you lost it on the last line it didnt tie in with the navy at all. BXP your closer woulda prob sounded better if you said something about fire and the atmosphere, it was creative though. I thought that BXP got a lil more personal and hit a lil bit harder, so he takes this battle.

v/BXP

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uppin
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ak-mixa
structure is good...flow is on target...no metas...wordplay is mad simple...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

B.X.P
structrue is nice...flow is on lock...no good metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
both had a nice structure...as well as a stable flow...neither had good metas...B.X.P had better wordplay...more connecting punches...and more personals...so basing off of that...B.X.P gets my vote...

VOTE - B.X.P

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