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Lay. 06-01-07 12:03 PM

Mystic. vs Lay Fear
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 06-03-07 at 12:03 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 06-01-07 12:04 PM

Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-07 12:04 PM.

Lay. 06-01-07 12:48 PM

yo..
yo I ain't worried bout this battle, n forget allya hunches dude
cuz the first half ya name, describe wat all ya fuckin punches do!.
he thinks he's important, but all ur rantin n high hopes, jus quit it
cuz I'll be usin My stic....for the sole purpose of beatin em with it
n ya say your slowly gettin better, my punches'll taint your witt
but fuck polishin up your skills,..you need to be paintin your shit!
ya think your ill man, but you'll get dismantled as you boast lies
cuz I don't seasickness, n I don't mean I can't handle boat rides
he says'll beat me, its a shame to do it.
cuz I'll beleive in my mind over matter......
once Mystic changes his name to it ^..

g'luck man.

System 06-01-07 02:16 PM

Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-07 02:16 PM.

Dickard. 06-01-07 02:33 PM

haha...check this shit out..Quick keystyle...


Your 4-0, big deal i havent even fired at will yet
You've battled 4 newbies...but no one with skill yet!
Time to step your game up, n stop thinkin that lay is sick
I bet your like ur avatar, long hair..and you play with dicks!!
Your a faggot, a bitch try to fuck u...u prob. just lay there
Just playin!! aint no hoe even come close to layin fear!!!
Fear layed? sike, he still on that fly weight status..fag
He's reachin first place in the tourney
....But wen i come..IMA SEND HIS ASS STR8 BACK TO LAST!!
Don't even try to bitch when i win, im 'flyin' on threw...
Woulda added more personals..but u bein whack
........................................IS all there is about you

Dickard. 06-01-07 02:44 PM

uppin like crazy bitches..................................

Implicit 06-01-07 03:12 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

very interesting battle..

Mystic - dude aint seen u in a while..you had some okay lines man..it kinda looked like your verse fell off toward the end of the verse..u started off cool but didnt finish it strong enough..wish u woulda had more creative personals. your closer was probly the best line in your verse..id give u a 6/10


Lay Fear - aint ever heard of u..you came out pretty strong with a cool personal and u finished pretty strong as well. u had a couple of nice name plays and some cool wordplay..the seasickness concept though is a little played out. you did good though. i think u won this pretty clearly due to your personals hittin a little harder. id give u a 8/10


vote goes to Lay Fear

GKillaz05 06-02-07 12:06 AM

Voted For: Mystic.

M:
none

L:
yo I ain't worried bout this battle, n forget allya hunches dude
cuz the first half ya name, describe wat all ya fuckin punches do!.


vote is for lay because he had one niice personal


Unexplained vote removed

Lay. 06-02-07 07:51 AM

lolz you say you voted for me?..but you accidentally voted for mystic, we should prolly get his vote fixed

Dickard. 06-02-07 10:08 AM

yeah..or we can keep it :) lol jp..2-0 u..........

GKillaz05 06-02-07 11:19 AM

I'm already on that, my bad.

Lay. 06-02-07 12:24 PM

haha.. :nono:
ahh..it takes so long to get shit voted on..i woulnd't want to delay it gettin closed longer than it will b

Mav. 06-02-07 03:55 PM

This was feedback posted for Lay Fear
 
ya think your ill man, but you'll get dismantled as you boast lies
cuz I don't seasickness, n I don't mean I can't handle boat rides
yo I ain't worried bout this battle, n forget allya hunches dude
cuz the first half ya name, describe wat all ya fuckin punches do!.
he says'll beat me, its a shame to do it.
cuz I'll beleive in my mind over matter......
once Mystic changes his name to it ^..

Those are your best lines and If so Id feel that they were the most creative....since i cant vote though this is just feed

Mav. 06-02-07 03:58 PM

Don't even try to bitch when i win, im 'flyin' on threw...
Woulda added more personals..but u bein whack
........................................IS all there is about you

ya thats bout it I liked this but it was preety played so if I could vote Id vote Lay

Ransum 06-02-07 04:00 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

yo I ain't worried bout this battle, n forget allya hunches dude
cuz the first half ya name, describe wat all ya fuckin punches do!.
decent start...
he thinks he's important, but all ur rantin n high hopes, jus quit it
cuz I'll be usin My stic....for the sole purpose of beatin em with it
decent...
n ya say your slowly gettin better, my punches'll taint your witt
but fuck polishin up your skills,..you need to be paintin your shit!
nah ia int feelign this...
ya think your ill man, but you'll get dismantled as you boast lies
cuz I don't seasickness, n I don't mean I can't handle boat rides
this was preety good.. could of word it a bit better but good..
he says'll beat me, its a shame to do it.
cuz I'll beleive in my mind over matter......
once Mystic changes his name to it ^..
aight ending could of been better but nice verse all around....



Your 4-0, big deal i havent even fired at will yet
You've battled 4 newbies...but no one with skill yet!
eeh start...
Time to step your game up, n stop thinkin that lay is sick
I bet your like ur avatar, long hair..and you play with dicks!!
eeh.. gay bars are so weak...
Your a faggot, a bitch try to fuck u...u prob. just lay there
Just playin!! aint no hoe even come close to layin fear!!!
aight..
Fear layed? sike, he still on that fly weight status..fag
He's reachin first place in the tourney
....But wen i come..IMA SEND HIS ASS STR8 BACK TO LAST!!..
aight...
Don't even try to bitch when i win, im 'flyin' on threw...
Woulda added more personals..but u bein whack
........................................IS all there is about you
aight...


lay-fear got this one man...
mystic i've seen way harder from you this is kinda disapointing maybe you sleep on him a bit to much which hurted at the end...

lay-fear i was a bit more impress with your verse a bit harder punches then useal and you seem more focus for thius battle nice job...

vote lay fear


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