Dirt Off Your Shoulder Remix
This is unfinished, but I need feedback. I still have to do another verse. I wanted to see wut yall thought so far b4 i did another verse tho. I tried to flip this beat to a different topic. And no I'm not a wannabe thug. This is actually on some real anger shit that I needed to get off my chest.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/opeymusic.htm Feedback? |
*listening*
hook is funny...nice...lyrics are nice nothing bad i can say about that... start ad libing...some of the voice overs sound a little distorted but that could be soundclick...maybe show a bit more emotion nice shit man keep it up |
nice drop
im loving this beat wish tim would make a beat for me :D lol |
the chorus is hot...Lyrics are nice....quality is good....adlibs would make it hotter but was never a fan of adlibs...nice work
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Lol That Chorus Was Hot
The Lyrics Were Boring But You Had A Nice Flow. Decent Track. |
This was semi hard to understand...lyrical content was really sub-par...I understand its a commercial track but ehhh...I don't like the beat...just isn't my style...delivery is kinda annoying...Flow is consistent...Not bad mun...Keep it up...Pz...
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when you said "turn that beat up" was someone actualy there to turn the beat up, or were you just sounding cool? j/w
hook - cool, i like flow - wow, real simple lyrics - below average voice and quality were coo enough hmm i dunno, i guess i just expected more |
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just soundin cool lol. actually i just couldnt think of an intro for shit so i just went with it |
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lol word ;) |
listenin.. this was hot.. but my mixtape is cancelled opey.. :( thnx for the time..
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you fuckin hoe lol. o well i'll still finish it and just post the finished version on here then. no harm no foul
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This was nice, .. beat was catchy, like it suposed to be, .. lyrical content fitted the beat in my opinon , i enjoyed listenening to it, .. nice remixed, w/ the splivit shout out, nice-ness .. *Want to hear the song when its finished ..*
Nice one Opey Dokey o.O I want ur cd Can I have your babies too?? please? |
send me $8 and i'll send u a cd. or u can try to dl it from kazaa but i'll tell the RIAA on u... BIATCH!
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where can i send it?? will u autograph it for me? youre my hero
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Strange everything is editted by Opey .. ~ I Wonder..o.O
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