Natural Killa vs fraud
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d/r

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-05 at 01:30 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-05 03:34 PM.

fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 12:47 PM.

Minds are teared if they think fraud's winning this shit,cuz that's kinda rare,
I mean,c'mon..it'd only make about as much sence...as that line up there,
Your shit is sooo fucking wack,your giving this whole site a big laugh,and,
Only people that can't pronounce MarvenJay's name...........are afgans,
A half man?..nah,you a full bitch..all the manhood in ya' head is all lies,no truth,
Cuz half of the site don't even know you..and the other half is just despising you,
So Fraud,realize the truth,your too wack in P.L.L,just a big pain 'n shit,
And to add insult to injury...............you went placed two of your names in it,
It must pain ya',bitch..cuz your nothing,just a waste of life,left rotting,
You've beaten nobody with skill..so what makes YOU think you've got it?,
Think about it,ya' repetiore's limited as fuck..you got nothing hot to bring,
And you know..what the fuck u doin' in EFL.......YOU'VE ONLY GOT 2 WINS!!,

BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH......

u got the wrong impression of fraud, get a better first look
stomp u w/ my other shoe cuz we started off on the wrong Foot
u smokin dirtweed...I'll 'ring' ya scrawny neck cuz im a 'buzz'kill
N.K scared, doin' more 'runnin' then drug smugglers from Brazil
he cant write 'free'hand...one's pickin da nose the others beatin hes-dick
i'd love to walk all over you but i cant stand steppin' in Dogshit
You more 'blown out of proportion' than da rumor w/ Jay-Z & Free
Either your one of the most washed up vets or maybe it's just me?
fraud here and my talent beyond you, my skills relate to a psyco savage
eat out ya heart-disreguard ya flesh-and leave ya bones in a loose bagage
i've seen your battles and it looks like you've been taken to hell
the only thing longer than your bars is your colum of "L's"


blah....
not my best,
just drop something quick.....

good luck...

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

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Voted For: Natural killa

first off, i expected more from both...its close so
im gonna actually rate each bar......
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Minds are teared if they think fraud's winning this shit,cuz that's kinda rare,
I mean,c'mon..it'd only make about as much sence...as that line up there,
^^decent, but thats been used on him b4 4/10
Your shit is sooo fucking wack,your giving this whole site a big laugh,and,
Only people that can't pronounce MarvenJay's name...........are afgans,
^^nah..wasnt feelin it 1/10
A half man?..nah,you a full bitch..all the manhood in ya' head is all lies,no truth,
Cuz half of the site don't even know you..and the other half is just despising you,
^^blah, rather weak man 4/10
So Fraud,realize the truth,your too wack in P.L.L,just a big pain 'n shit,
And to add insult to injury...............you went placed two of your names in it,
^^ok personal 6/10
It must pain ya',bitch..cuz your nothing,just a waste of life,left rotting,
You've beaten nobody with skill..so what makes YOU think you've got it?,
^^ok, not a real personal thou....4/10
Think about it,ya' repetiore's limited as fuck..you got nothing hot to bring,
And you know..what the fuck u doin' in EFL.......YOU'VE ONLY GOT 2 WINS!!,
^^eh, really not a strong closer..4/10
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.23/60
overall your verse wasnt that bad, not great either but
you concepts boarder simplistic wit, imo your verse is choppy
n fragmented like your strugglin to complete your bar by using
any words available from your vocabulary...
ease up on the length of your lines by a couple syllables n
your verse wouldnt seem so fragmented with fillers.
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u got the wrong impression of fraud, get a better first look
stomp u w/ my other shoe cuz we started off on the wrong Foot
^^eh, seen much better flips of this concept 3/10
u smokin dirtweed...I'll 'ring' ya scrawny neck cuz im a 'buzz'kill
N.K scared, doin' more 'runnin' then drug smugglers from Brazil
^^just wack...1/10
he cant write 'free'hand...one's pickin da nose the others beatin hes-dick
i'd love to walk all over you but i cant stand steppin' in Dogshit
^^nice...6/10
You more 'blown out of proportion' than da rumor w/ Jay-Z & Free
Either your one of the most washed up vets or maybe it's just me?
^^nope,lacked a punch in the bar..0/10
fraud here and my talent beyond you, my skills relate to a psyco savage
eat out ya heart-disreguard ya flesh-and leave ya bones in a loose bagage
^^why is this here? its wack...0/10
i've seen your battles and it looks like you've been taken to hell
the only thing longer than your bars is your colum of "L's"
^^good concept but his l's colum has no length
i kno what you meant but it was badly delivered....very badly 1/10

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.11/60
horrible verse.....nk would've had to have been blind n retarded to lose this match to the verse you wrote n posted..
ultimately, work on your punches n dont use bars of complete fillers in battle verses..
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no hate

thx for the vote..

If you want a RTF on ya' battle..you can PM me..
As i am the king of aliases...so..yea..:slick:

whatever thanks for the vote daz................................

i had 1 hour to drop and i just freestyle some-shit noting serious....

upp'in

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wanna do a quick battle in the front-line???
this is taking mad long......

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Voted For: Natural killa

I think that Natural killa got this battle because i feel that Natural killa came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Natural killa got it they were used effectifely and were on point fraud u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Natural killa good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Natural killa and flow and structure i'll give to Natural killa.

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