"I'm Sorry"
Ox laid this track to a beat that Khi made from a sample that came from I dunno WHERE the hell he finds these shits, but he sure finds em and kills em. I LOVE this beat. This song'll make a mofo water up if they're actually paying attention to it. Classic music, point black period.
http://therushent2.dmusic.com - "I'm Sorry" Quote:
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Mhmm.. Beat is ill.. I think ox needs to tone down his vocals and be a lil less loud and a bit more melodic on these deep tracks mainly to suit the beat and vibe more.. But other than that, I can respect this shit.. Flows on point.. Lyrics are good.. Jus the loudness of the vocals is the only problem in this track.. But I guess thats jus his style..
Word.. And last emp is dope--------------- |
^^Nos, tghanks for the feed man. The track sounds 'loud' because of the clipping. It's not bad, but it's definitely not the lasre quality you normally here fomr me.
and LMFAO @ ass emporer :gfy: Oh yeah, viagra to this thread. |
*listening*
got that 3-6 mafia type of feel. the flow is a little too slow for me... and some of the emphasis was just a little corny, everyone got there own style but meh. it DID get better & pick up through the middle... im feelin what your sayin. keep practicin.. return the favor.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210622 |
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Yeah, thanks for the feedback. Once again, this isn't me, this is my boy Ox. I guess I can see what you're saying about the flow. I'll hit your link. Uno. Upperage. |
uh huh..uppin for all the cocksmokers who I left feed on and ain't done nada yet.
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Beat: love it
Flow: pretty good Rhyming: decent Delivery: good Overall:...some played lines and cliches..."part of the problem or solution"...eh eh...wuts next "Time heals all wounds"...nah the prince shit is hot though... 7.5/10 1 |
Listening..
The beat is fucking dope as shit.. the flow is pretty good.. I think his flow sounds fine, whatever.. his delivery is decent enough.. some of the lines didn't sound that good.. like, they weren't original.. overall, a pretty good track. it started out a little slow, but picked out and came out pretty nice. |
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