This Is Hip-hop!!!!!!!!!!
 

THIS IS BLASHPHEMY This IS MADNESS
Nah actually this is hip-hop madness
Got a pen-n-pad kit to express da sadness
get bent and mad kid gotta move on harder
got 300 bars to rep da knights of sparda
My raps in one knight to outshine da Carter
The street like nigga is a street fight figure
Punches like balrog shake da block
and make da street lights flicker
Home is where the heart is
No home makes your heartless
Heartless makes target
for when the fog get darkened
To furfill their pockets.
Regardless if da victim is honest
Re-guard hits. if da fist miss da artists
Get back to the pen at hand. The chalk plan
Blan to the man if they dont understand
the first scan, recopy and print out
Cuz ya script sloppy and pens out
the pin point cant extract my pen point
So i can only describe da vibe inside
Recite it live, and hopefully it ell
keep da fire alive in their eyes.


Blah blah random shit. Yall niggas keep it flowin

ok i will see ya

Not feelin it that much. The first two lines the end rhyme was the same so it started off weak. Didn't really have a concept and felt like a keystyle. The pen point line was my favorite and i liked the quickness of the flow but the material just wasn't there. Keep at it though stay elevating bro.

i was hoping to start a cypher >_< Not for judgement lol.

aiyo my boy chris on that north maryland tip
Aint no better spits from florida to conneticut
And I will kill any random person for one from my hometown
We call it murderville 'cuz one from all teams gonna go down
Now you think you know how it is as I write this
But you never lived in Maryland, man, never seen a sniper crisis
Never seen the poor and homeless buy drugs for lil kids 'n fight
Then hide from the cops just so they can live Home-free another night
It's lonely, send ya mothers, sike, but she won't lose her life
Ya brother might afford it

So choose another state you fucking tourist

I got Xaviers Telepathy locked down with a thought
They way I slay MC w/ words im lyrical juggernaut
Niggas never seen much less been on the block
I destroy what I see like cyclops when my sights locked
If you tamed, dont get slain with dat lame game you sustain
Im known to rip rappers brains like punch from wolverine
Your country or religion, tell me which do you bleieve
So many people put down da bible
and try to light a dark sky like jubilee
The rhymes you once sold are now gettin old
Fake mc's try and take my skills like rogue
Ready to explode, but play my card right like Gambit
So i can take my rap medals like my talent is magnet
I'll annaliate ya more in my most primal form
You can't test when ya flesh gets torn
In other words you'll get riped apart atleast
With bezerker rage i create storms cuz Imma beast
never be a slob or Blob cuz i aint obese
So mystic with my physique
My true form clouded in illusion like mystique

*wishes that you would've started this in the hip hop lounge.*


s.v.

A sick man's medicine.

yah for real put this where it belongs and get those subforums poppin

Where's the don't post nothin' forum so i can link lil wayne right hur

um why?