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Dabatos 12-25-04 05:11 AM

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To the "BEST" poem that describes the feeling of Christmas

Willa 12-25-04 05:38 AM

merry xmas ho ho ho
hookers makin dough
familys fighting foodfight
i cried not i lied
can i have money i tried :(

Willa 12-25-04 05:39 AM

29168 is the account lol
and stop copying led poetic lol having ur wins turned to losses

L.I. 12-25-04 05:48 AM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118722
It might not descibe the feeling but I remembered writing it lol

Insight. 12-25-04 08:34 AM

Unmatched Gifts, px

Insight. 12-25-04 08:57 AM

Unmatched Gifts
Hustling and bustling trying to make it to the saftey latched door,
not noticing that she has dropped her supply of tinsil on the floor.
This is the Christmas, the one that will forever be remembered,
the lights outside will glisten, and the turkey will be tender,
She rushes to her job to try and pay for the Xmas fines,
Not realizing she has left behind he little boy's Wish list behind.
She comes back to get it, to find the house in a mess,
The turkey, presents, and now cleaning just adds to the stress.
So she tells her son to behave, for their is much work to do,
but the last words out his mouth were, "I want to spend it with you."
But she was too busy moving to hear these simple 7 words,
Inside her mind "So much to do" were the only things she heard.
So she went and got the turkey, the presents were safe in the car,
She thought it would finally be perfect, but money only reaches so far.
On the Eve of Christmas it was time for her son's play
Well everything is taken care of, I can take off this day.
So she went to his school, and enjoyed the show,
Thinking about her son made her realize how big he had grown.
As they pulled into the garage, she felt something was wrong,
She wondered why these feeling were lasting so long
She looked inside and saw the presents were gone, nowhere to be found,
she couldnt hide her remorse and just cried aloud,
Mommy, dont cry, we don't need those things,
Because the joy of having u, no present can ever bring.
So this is a lesson, to those who have gone off the path,
you may think your doing great, but u can still come in dead last!

I dont know if it provides the feelin overall, but it provideds some.

Enygma 12-27-04 12:04 AM

Word....here's my Christmas Lymric :thumbup:

Christmas is anticipated for weeks...
Partake in the greatest of feasts...
And taking a moment...
As presents are opened...
To thank god for making reciepts.

XPETBK-29201

JRoy 12-27-04 12:06 AM

hmmm you make liek 50 threads daily dont you....

Denied Truth 12-27-04 12:21 AM

hurr it iz.....

The Christmas Feeling

worddd.....

Denied Truth 12-27-04 12:27 AM

The Christmas feeling, the joy abound
the children creepin attemptin to make no sound
the children sleeping, serious or true
they can not wait untill their sleeping is through
and they may awake to their parents delight
to see the gifts and their eyez alight
and the reception of giftz iz den recieved
the children get not all they perceived..
the earth'z children, wit no Christ are ungrateful..
the Christian children see plenty for which to be thankful...
though they had not..what they asked for plenty..
they still got alot...way more than many..
and think of the presents sought out through the year
and the cherished memoriez of christmas you hold so dear..
and since this christmas day haz come and gone...
i hope you are not found alone...
i pray you have family or friendz or petz...
Merry Christmas, No "X", and May God Bless....
-God Bless you all.

EastCoast 12-27-04 12:37 AM

the meaning:

it is meant to celebrate the birth of jesus but it seems to be mis-used
people use this day to have sex, smoke weed, and commit harmful sins
somehow any where there is happiness, evil always intertwines
we can stop the acts but continue to continue in fighting for pleasure
not realizing that this is completely the opposite of what christmas was intended for

the outcast:

vivid thoughts of the past from child hood to adolescence run through one's mind
Trying to find another kind of peer that shares the same attributes as them
But never succeeding in this mental mission yet to be accomplished
however, all the terribul thoughts and emotions evaporate on this day
and the good out wieghs the bad, creating 24 hours to remember
pictures taken, videos filmed, and the sound of baby laughter filling the air
joy and happiness surrounding the beings involved in the activities
for that one day everyone fits in and is accepted by the warmth of others'

the non-privileged:

yet all is forgotten about those who are deprived of these privileges
those in enthiopia, those in cambodia,those dying in the war that we ar fighting
theyve never heard of the plump man who dresses in red and vastly sneaks into homes
theyve never felt the smoothe surface of paper that encages a gift
theyve never felt the love or care of somone else besides family
theyve never felt, smelled, or tasted these experiences...we have

Valerie 12-27-04 01:40 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dabatos
To the "BEST" poem that describes the feeling of Christmas


this is pointless i got dat much allready!! :nono:

Insight. 12-27-04 12:35 PM

But your a fag who freeposts, so who cares. Hey Dabatos, have you decided who won yet?

EastCoast 12-27-04 05:56 PM

yeah, have you decided yet................j/w

Artemis 12-27-04 05:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by enygma
Word....here's my Christmas Lymric :thumbup:

Christmas is anticipated for weeks...
Partake in the greatest of feasts...
And taking a moment...
As presents are opened...
To thank god for making reciepts.

XPETBK-29201

lmfao weerd, he should win. weerd... :cool:


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