SickHead. vs Ransum
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-16-07 at 06:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SickHead. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-07 02:59 PM.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-07 04:30 PM.

ayo sickhead. i swear i put this in the rules but i guess i didnt...

BUT THIS IS THE RULE THOU...

10-16 LINES ONLY...
i aint doing that unlimited bar shit....

aight...

300 J.G we running this rap shit..

I've Unleashed-The-Hunger! Callin Me Out? Dis Geek-Is-Bummered
You Just 'Called To Your Death' Like 'Dialing Grim Reapers-Number'!//
I'ma Beast-Who-Plunders! I Aint Gotta Hit U Wit Bleak-Thunder
Cuz You'll 'Fall Off From The Slightest Hit' Like 'Cheap-Bumpers'!//
You A "Meat-Lover"!! Dudes Have This Guy Cummin-Terrific
We Know Ran 'Takes The Pipe' Like 'Stealin Plumber-Equipment'!!//
I Just Cant Like Yo Bars! You Never Go Hard-When-Writin
Yo Lines Like 'Annoying People', Cuz Its 'Hard-To-Like-Em'!//
You Think You Got Flavor? Lol, Then I'll Probably-Rip-Yo-Flow
Punches'll 'Roast Ya Flavor' Like The 'Comedy-Central-Show'!//
U'll Never Get 'Paid To Rap', U Wont Get Checks Large-To-Spit-Shit
Only Way Yo 'Rhymes'll Make Cake' Is If U 'Bake Ya Bars-In-Bisquik'!//
I'll Scar-Em-Vicious!! Quit Actin Like Yo Bars-The-Sickest
Like U 'Live Miles Away From A Hospital', U 'Far-From-Sickness'//
Act Hard,-U'll-Get-Dissed!! I'll Leave This Emcee-Slayed-Out
Only Time You'll 'Leave Wit A W'.. Is If U Order 'Wendy's-Take-Out'!//1


Good Luck Fam..

since my computer keeps fucking up i'll key this quick and hope my shit dont shut off again EEEERRRRRRRRR......

fuck sickhead...
dude punches like scrambler modems... cuz all hes NET-WORK(neckwork) 'stright-mis-led'...
rejecting 'male-offer'(mail) only time u diss-heads...why ryde with sonny-bar when u give out Sick-head...

B.E.S.T.. better be prepare for our Raid...got'em stuck on the Punch like gruaduation prade's...
ocean waves i'll be u'r open grave... cuz u'll Never Blow Like Broken Grenade's....

i will eat u alive then swallow knives just to see that u die.. quit rap you have no reason to rhyme....
let me pee on this guy.. cuz hes fucking raps are more boring them Theme Park Lines....

Oh Lord.. when I grab the mic.. u'll feel my verse like i Rip ya Torso...
Claim to be on Top?... Till i Shorten ya hight Limit.. like a Lepercauns wardrode...

act rude... and i get heated like cancun.. ur rash moves could get you stabbed like tattoos...
this fuckin guys a virgin who couldnt bust a nut with a sledge hammer and a box of cashews...

fuck that after 5 bars ya life is ova... i gotta strike like pro-bowlers..
Cuz u'r punches stay soft... like boiled rice and light Yougurt...

kid acts all fake in threads .. What's got you in a battling mind?...
when ya Talent Pool's .. the two foot deep.. inflatable kind...

you're a lame disease, pull ya spinal cord thru ya spleen-n-jump rope ya frame with ease…
I aim to bleed, ya couldn't spit ill with discharge from viginal yeast…


change up the structure to show i have 8 bars...
which is 16 lines...

Dont understand my punches or whatever PLEZ PM ME FOR QUESTIONS PLEZ....

GOOD LUCK...

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

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sickhead u had the better structure in this battle.....better multis....and easier to read....but your punches were comin weak......they weren't hittin hard enough......7/10

ransum like u said u keystyled it quick and i can tell its keystyled quick cause it seems rushed as far as the structure and wordplay....but your punches and just overall diss hit harder and even though it was quick u still came like u wanted it more.....8/10

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upp'in for votes......................................

upp'in for votes plez...............

can we get atless 1 vote in here????

upp'in for a fucking votes plez lol...........................................

upp'in for votes........................................

Voted For: Ransum

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Voted For: SickHead.

I thought Sickheads shit was alot more direct and on key than Ransum...both had good wordplay and creativness, but Sickheads shit was just overal connecting alot more....Ransum you did really well, i was really impressed and your getting a shit ton better bro...but Sick just over took you

upp'in for votes......................................

Voted For: SickHead.

Okay, verses with some weak punches, but some pretty tight word play saved em both.

SickHead: Your set-up lines were very weak, but your punchlines had very smooth wordplay. Multiple syllable lines and uncommon rhymes made it better than average.
Score: 6.5

Ransum: You had some good personals to start it, then it all just kind of fell off. Theme Park lines? heated like Cancun? It's like you tried to be original but came out boring. Multi's need good solid punches to make them effective.
Score: 5

Descent. Much love.