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schema 12-24-04 10:34 PM

03.R-Rated .vs. 32.Hotshh!
 
Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

14 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

Designated Voters:
9th Degree
New Method
Will A Peer
Lady Fiyah
Acuity
Viscosity
Mimesis


If you would like anyone on this list removed, you must PM Schema BEFORE you drop your verse.

N.Tavarez 12-24-04 10:35 PM

ill ck in now....

Restricted 12-25-04 09:21 AM



Hmm...Should I Try This Round?

Blah..Check It.

~R~

N.Tavarez 12-28-04 11:27 PM

^^ dont try..see what happens..
 
ok..

Go ahead..
half-ass get Serviced and Sizzled...Fuck Punches! Im Wording Riddles.
So...you can point this Loss at Your self....Like Inverted Nipples!!
Your two last wins defined as Well timed Luck..And Rhymes wasted
Plus you full of more 'Bitch' Then All girl retreats in Confined Spaces!
Why buy new sigs?...I'll put the ' R ' for free to ya Face... (azor)
Your skill level would have to rise just for you to be a Disgrace!
So take some Old Advice....and Go Lay low till ya Flow is Nice..
He win the tourney for cash ? Sub-Zero wouldnt Throw Em Ice!!*
Ha!!.. this 'Vets' Clowned... Incapable of laying good text down...
Cuz Bar nights the only time Restricted's "Seeing the Next Round"!!
This Kids Insane!....Rated "Paints pictures" but I "Rip the Frame"
So "plant soccer seeds " 'Grow balls' and play a Different Game!!
"RV Legend" ?....Nah..R-Rated as Trash!...Degraded and Smashed..
So why dont u 'gracefully bow out'..like rappers praying at Mass?**

*changed sig from sub zero to that R shit
**'Graceful Bow Wow..get it?...
no homo (d/r votes)..pay attention

Restricted 12-28-04 11:57 PM



Haha..NiCe...

Look Kid..

I'll Be Quick To Shatter All Doubts About Who's Baddest In Bouts..
Dudes Like His Hoe Bitch.....Can't Keep Rated Outta His Mouth..
Why You In This Tourney? Read The Title Kid Its "King of Rapverse"..
You'd Only Stand A Chance Of Winning If It Was "King of Rapsworse"!!
You Can Kill-Ah Bwoy..But Against A Man Bitch You Stand No Chance..
Thought You Was HotShit..But Just HotShh..Mistaken At First Glance!!
I'll Attack Ya Heart..Call You Reggie Watch You Die From This White..
Like Me Battling Anerexic Paralegics..This Is Truely An Unfair Fight!!
Lines So Stretched..Like A Dick With 20 Lbs Connected From 20 Flights..
Kids More Paranoid From Pussy Than The Kid From 40 Days and 40 Nights!!
Its Now A Bloody Situation, and You Probably Think That Your Bad...
Cause 2-0 Is The Longest Streak You've Had Since You Started Using Pads!!
WTF?...Take Your Verse Back..Edit Ya Post and Just Fucking No-Show..
Because You Winnin Dis Battle Is Like Cars On Cinder Blocks..A No-Go!!

~R~

Nynth Degree 12-29-04 03:11 PM

hotshh!:
half-ass get Serviced and Sizzled...Fuck Punches! Im Wording Riddles.
So...you can point this Loss at Your self....Like Inverted Nipples!!
Decent opener, punch wasn't all that but nice wordplay
Your two last wins defined as Well timed Luck..And Rhymes wasted
Plus you full of more 'Bitch' Then All girl retreats in Confined Spaces!
Decent punch
Why buy new sigs?...I'll put the ' R ' for free to ya Face... (azor)
Your skill level would have to rise just for you to be a Disgrace!
Setup was ehh, punch didn't hit
So take some Old Advice....and Go Lay low till ya Flow is Nice..
He win the tourney for cash ? Sub-Zero wouldnt Throw Em Ice!!*
Decent personal
Ha!!.. this 'Vets' Clowned... Incapable of laying good text down...
Cuz Bar nights the only time Restricted's "Seeing the Next Round"!!
^Dope, highlight of your verse
This Kids Insane!....Rated "Paints pictures" but I "Rip the Frame"
So "plant soccer seeds " 'Grow balls' and play a Different Game!!
Slightly above average
"RV Legend" ?....Nah..R-Rated as Trash!...Degraded and Smashed..
So why dont u 'gracefully bow out'..like rappers praying at Mass?
Good closer, nice wordplay.

R-Rated:
I'll Be Quick To Shatter All Doubts About Who's Baddest In Bouts..
Dudes Like His Hoe Bitch.....Can't Keep Rated Outta His Mouth..
Decent multis, but punch wasn't that hard
Why You In This Tourney? Read The Title Kid Its "King of Rapverse"..
You'd Only Stand A Chance Of Winning If It Was "King of Rapsworse"!!
Lmao thank you for reminding me of how I battled when I was 9
You Can Kill-Ah Bwoy..But Against A Man Bitch You Stand No Chance..
Thought You Was HotShit..But Just HotShh..Mistaken At First Glance!!
Decent
I'll Attack Ya Heart..Call You Reggie Watch You Die From This White..
Like Me Battling Anerexic Paralegics..This Is Truely An Unfair Fight!!
Setup was good, but punch didn't deliver
Lines So Stretched..Like A Dick With 20 Lbs Connected From 20 Flights..
Kids More Paranoid From Pussy Than The Kid From 40 Days and 40 Nights!!
Weak...
Its Now A Bloody Situation, and You Probably Think That Your Bad...
Cause 2-0 Is The Longest Streak You've Had Since You Started Using Pads!!
Decent, could've been worded better
WTF?...Take Your Verse Back..Edit Ya Post and Just Fucking No-Show..
Because You Winnin Dis Battle Is Like Cars On Cinder Blocks..A No-Go!!
Weak closer, again could've been worded better.

Winner: hotshh!, for harder punches. R, you said you weren't gonna try on this battle...but you should've. I've seen better from you. But no hate, good battle y'all...

FlowIntelligent. 12-29-04 04:29 PM

Im voting on this battle since it was my tourney schema add me to the designated voters list

hotshh!

half-ass get Serviced and Sizzled...Fuck Punches! Im Wording Riddles.
So...you can point this Loss at Your self....Like Inverted Nipples!!
^^lmfao funny shit dam ill be laughing all day over this 9/10
Your two last wins defined as Well timed Luck..And Rhymes wasted
Plus you full of more 'Bitch' Then All girl retreats in Confined Spaces!
^^lmao good consistency dope bar 7/10
Why buy new sigs?...I'll put the ' R ' for free to ya Face... (azor)
Your skill level would have to rise just for you to be a Disgrace!
^^played concept 4/10
So take some Old Advice....and Go Lay low till ya Flow is Nice..
He win the tourney for cash ? Sub-Zero wouldnt Throw Em Ice!!*
^^lol good personal decent punch 6/10
Ha!!.. this 'Vets' Clowned... Incapable of laying good text down...
Cuz Bar nights the only time Restricted's "Seeing the Next Round"!!
^^dope bar maybe youre best 9/10
This Kids Insane!....Rated "Paints pictures" but I "Rip the Frame"
So "plant soccer seeds " 'Grow balls' and play a Different Game!!
^^dam nevermind this is your best bar 10/10
"RV Legend" ?....Nah..R-Rated as Trash!...Degraded and Smashed..
So why dont u 'gracefully bow out'..like rappers praying at Mass?**
^^damn no comment just dope 9/10

overall : 54/70 (77%)

r-rated:

I'll Be Quick To Shatter All Doubts About Who's Baddest In Bouts..
Dudes Like His Hoe Bitch.....Can't Keep Rated Outta His Mouth..
^^dope opener dope punch 9/10
Why You In This Tourney? Read The Title Kid Its "King of Rapverse"..
You'd Only Stand A Chance Of Winning If It Was "King of Rapsworse"!!
^^lmfao dope bar 8/10
You Can Kill-Ah Bwoy..But Against A Man Bitch You Stand No Chance..
Thought You Was HotShit..But Just HotShh..Mistaken At First Glance!!
^^decent nameplay kinda played tho 6/10
I'll Attack Ya Heart..Call You Reggie Watch You Die From This White..
Like Me Battling Anerexic Paralegics..This Is Truely An Unfair Fight!!
^^decent good meta's weak punches 6/10
Lines So Stretched..Like A Dick With 20 Lbs Connected From 20 Flights..
Kids More Paranoid From Pussy Than The Kid From 40 Days and 40 Nights!!
^^good meta wasnt feeling it that much 7/10
Its Now A Bloody Situation, and You Probably Think That Your Bad...
Cause 2-0 Is The Longest Streak You've Had Since You Started Using Pads!!
^^lmao dope bar 8/10
WTF?...Take Your Verse Back..Edit Ya Post and Just Fucking No-Show..
Because You Winnin Dis Battle Is Like Cars On Cinder Blocks..A No-Go!!
^^dope closer good meta 9/10

overall : 53/70 (76%)

amazingly close battle but hotshh took this one barely 1 point was the difference... r-rated u coulda had this one with one more dope bar

vote: hotshh!

~Lady Fiya~ 12-29-04 04:53 PM

R Rated~
I'll Be Quick To Shatter All Doubts About Who's Baddest In Bouts..
Dudes Like His Hoe Bitch.....Can't Keep Rated Outta His Mouth..
was feelin this, but the punch wasn't hard...............
Why You In This Tourney? Read The Title Kid Its "King of Rapverse"..
You'd Only Stand A Chance Of Winning If It Was "King of Rapsworse"!!
lol was aight
You Can Kill-Ah Bwoy..But Against A Man Bitch You Stand No Chance..
Thought You Was HotShit..But Just HotShh..Mistaken At First Glance!!
was an aight nameplay....
I'll Attack Ya Heart..Call You Reggie Watch You Die From This White..
Like Me Battling Anerexic Paralegics..This Is Truely An Unfair Fight!!
nice metas.. punch was not there tho..
Lines So Stretched..Like A Dick With 20 Lbs Connected From 20 Flights..
Kids More Paranoid From Pussy Than The Kid From 40 Days and 40 Nights!!
ha ha was an aight attempt
Its Now A Bloody Situation, and You Probably Think That Your Bad...
Cause 2-0 Is The Longest Streak You've Had Since You Started Using Pads!!
lmmfao nice meta
WTF?...Take Your Verse Back..Edit Ya Post and Just Fucking No-Show..
Because You Winnin Dis Battle Is Like Cars On Cinder Blocks..A No-Go!!
ill closer lol..

Hotshh~
half-ass get Serviced and Sizzled...Fuck Punches! Im Wording Riddles.
So...you can point this Loss at Your self....Like Inverted Nipples!!
lmfao nice opener............ omg
Your two last wins defined as Well timed Luck..And Rhymes wasted
Plus you full of more 'Bitch' Then All girl retreats in Confined Spaces!
ha ha nice, good wordin too..
Why buy new sigs?...I'll put the ' R ' for free to ya Face... (azor)
Your skill level would have to rise just for you to be a Disgrace!
not good..
So take some Old Advice....and Go Lay low till ya Flow is Nice..
He win the tourney for cash ? Sub-Zero wouldnt Throw Em Ice!!*
nice personal usin his old sig
Ha!!.. this 'Vets' Clowned... Incapable of laying good text down...
Cuz Bar nights the only time Restricted's "Seeing the Next Round"!!
omg.... LMFAO... best bar i seen so far.. period
This Kids Insane!....Rated "Paints pictures" but I "Rip the Frame"
So "plant soccer seeds " 'Grow balls' and play a Different Game!!
ha ha ROFL nice metas.. omg
"RV Legend" ?....Nah..R-Rated as Trash!...Degraded and Smashed..
So why dont u 'gracefully bow out'..like rappers praying at Mass?**
was aight coulda been worded a lil' better

Hotshh: took the battle he had more witty punches and metaphors and multis.. personals were aight.. R Rated has some good metaphors also, but Hotshh's bars simply hit harder..
nice battle.

V/ Hotshh

Willa 12-29-04 05:57 PM

half-ass get Serviced and Sizzled...Fuck Punches! Im Wording Riddles.
So...you can point this Loss at Your self....Like Inverted Nipples!!
8.5/10 mad funny pretty good word play
Your two last wins defined as Well timed Luck..And Rhymes wasted
Plus you full of more 'Bitch' Then All girl retreats in Confined Spaces!
was alrite above average but nothing special 7.5
Why buy new sigs?...I'll put the ' R ' for free to ya Face... (azor)
Your skill level would have to rise just for you to be a Disgrace!
played not original 6/10
So take some Old Advice....and Go Lay low till ya Flow is Nice..
He win the tourney for cash ? Sub-Zero wouldnt Throw Em Ice!!*
8/10 good personal
Ha!!.. this 'Vets' Clowned... Incapable of laying good text down...
Cuz Bar nights the only time Restricted's "Seeing the Next Round"!!
best ive seen so far funny 9/10
This Kids Insane!....Rated "Paints pictures" but I "Rip the Frame"
So "plant soccer seeds " 'Grow balls' and play a Different Game!!
took a played concept and made it original with mad metaphores 10/10
"RV Legend" ?....Nah..R-Rated as Trash!...Degraded and Smashed..
So why dont u 'gracefully bow out'..like rappers praying at Mass?**
pretty good wordplay 8.5/10
57.5/70



I'll Be Quick To Shatter All Doubts About Who's Baddest In Bouts..
Dudes Like His Hoe Bitch.....Can't Keep Rated Outta His Mouth..
good multis but wasnt that hard 8/10
Why You In This Tourney? Read The Title Kid Its "King of Rapverse"..
You'd Only Stand A Chance Of Winning If It Was "King of Rapsworse"!!
sounds like a new b bar something like u see a little 8 yr old girl say 7/10
You Can Kill-Ah Bwoy..But Against A Man Bitch You Stand No Chance..
Thought You Was HotShit..But Just HotShh..Mistaken At First Glance!!
ok nameplay but not all that good kinda played 8/10
I'll Attack Ya Heart..Call You Reggie Watch You Die From This White..
Like Me Battling Anerexic Paralegics..This Is Truely An Unfair Fight!!
pretty good metaphores btu the punch was not existent and played 6/10
Lines So Stretched..Like A Dick With 20 Lbs Connected From 20 Flights..
Kids More Paranoid From Pussy Than The Kid From 40 Days and 40 Nights!!
wasnt feelin it at all 6/10
Its Now A Bloody Situation, and You Probably Think That Your Bad...
Cause 2-0 Is The Longest Streak You've Had Since You Started Using Pads!!
good play but it was played period lines are dead 8/10
WTF?...Take Your Verse Back..Edit Ya Post and Just Fucking No-Show..
Because You Winnin Dis Battle Is Like Cars On Cinder Blocks..A No-Go!!
played not a good closer could have been wordewde batter 7./10
50.5/70
vote hotshh

Willa 12-29-04 05:58 PM

closed even if the other pl were to vote to r he still couldnt win so closed winner hotshh


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