The Revelation Vs. Drama Queen
 

This is gonna be easy. (She's sick)

Checking In

(I recovered :thumbup: )

I'll make you sick again with my illness. -_-

I'm gonna do a diss track. No offense DQ, I just am in a dissing mood.

I need an extension till uhm I'd say Sunday but that's probably too late so Saturday is okay, I'll try to manage hehe.

Extension needed till Sunday.

(I'ma drop then too)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3385435

World Issues

www.soundclick.com/therevelation

Never Understand

You never said we couldn't collab.

dq
Flow: 5/10 on and off throughout didnt really hit the snares
Delivery:8/10 was ur strong point u were soft and humble in the speech parts but u let ur anger out in ur verses
Creativity: 7/10 like ive said you cnat be very creative with these "topics if ud call them that
Lyrics: 6.5/10 you came decent here some parts seemed repetative
Beat:6.5/10 pretty cool different not something i would really spit to though

Total:33/50

rev
Flow: 6.5/10 not very bad at all much improved
Delivery: 4.5/10 very monotone ur boring rev lol get into it
Creativity: 7/10 played really but im not ahting cause these topics suck
Lyrics:6.5/10 you did what you could with these dumb topics
Beat:6/10 im starting to resent sampled beats

Total:30.5 if your quality was a tad ebtter and u worked on ur delivery you would have had thsi in the bag but ur improving
so vote goes to dq