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Wicked One vs Maku JaiiLiin
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-29-04 at 10:07 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 09:38 PM.
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 09:40 PM.
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Tha best is here, I can tell your scent's near...
I'm in tha pressence of a queer, because i sense fear... I'm amazed how you think your brow raising to tha king... I'm unimpressed with your best,so I won't waste any ink... This is a quick-key,so your fucked not with a stiffy... But instantly by my witty speach, which is instinctly keyed swiftly... Your Shits Weak,I will rip u like a migrant farm worker... Cuz when it comes to talent,your William Hung or far worser... Your words are mediocre at best,I'll choke ya neck, then open ya chest... Grab ya lungs,til you get a vote, I'm holdin ya breath... You should of known this was death, weaksauce... Speak soft, this is a free-keyed beatin and still ur tweaks lost... Seek god,cuz I'll leave you a holy spirit, grab your soul and spear it... Damn your flows are def'? but you can only hear it... Known as fearless, I'm what your only fear is, literally... Ya whole career is hopeless like coachin' queer kids in little league... Iam lyrically tha illest thing to hit tha scene since disease... I'm tha nicest rhymer,and like Al Qaida, i aint feelin peace... But when i look past this gothic bastard,& laugh in dis-gust... As I let tha clip bust, fast lead bullets left casualties: ashes and dust... Aight ...Aight ...Drop your verse then kid...1 |
yer statements' as opinionated as an eight grader's, let it sit in ya chest//
so by ya own definitional statement, ya ain't considered a vet// ya not hot, and too simple to drop at this// ya dart aren't meant to penetrate deep, like adult cock down an infant's esophacus// I'm murdering you, then servin a third of ya crew// while burnin ya booth. before the return of your verse to verbal abuse//* Fear it when I lift you wit guns, when it's spittin the hollow through// cuz ya lyrics are wicked as nuns, livin in solitude// for you to spit that you ill, is really fictional droppin// my verse'll put the check in the third box, in additional options//** *-he has a battle going on at the same time as me with verbal abuse **-that third box says, 'disable smilies in text', this line basically means, you won't be able to smile in your verse, or about it. |
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61 views......and no votes yet cmon people VOTE..........
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
maku got it cuz he had harder punches and had a good personal... shit flow was good...too...lol wicked you werent that bad but needed harder punches and some personalz... better onez... vote=maku jaiiliin |
Voted For: Wicked One
lol..very good battle... wickedone...you had a good verse..but can't u do better.. these rhymes were basiclly to basic..but overall it was better then wut i can do lol... score7/10 maku...damn man..u really gota work on structure..i didn't even want to read ur verse but had too cuz of structure..overall u had pretty good punclines.. but jst wasn't hard enough.. vote: wicked |
Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
wicked one banned for biting maku wins regardless now votes matter not maku pm strobe for your win nuff said |
This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573 |
Voted For: Wicked One
Maku Jaiiliin: iight you had nice flow but your stucture was fucked lol...your punche swerent that good eather did come hard enoguh they were iight but i dont understand how your winning...but..you need work on wordplay also but not to many people on rv and rb use it so...try working with vocabulary it gives a depth a better chance to win... Wicked One: k nice verse nice stucturre and it flowed nicly good vocabulary liked your verse a whole lot could be pretty dope in a few years you will be :) as me to we need to battle some time...also nice punches hit ahrd worked well nicely played you took this i felt...not no wordplay but that shits hard i know it but its hard to get..some multis hit hard tho you won... VOTE: Wicked One return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154545 |
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