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-The Council- vs Arsen
Battle Rules:
10-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 10-24-05 at 10:28 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
-The Council- has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 10:07 PM.
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I kill like I’m next to Def and Close 2 jail.But until one come out I got dope 4 sale…Yeah They getting high and they takin them spoon shots.But c’mon get right man my strips like a boom box.I shoot you below the waist,you know dudes that will pump your brakes I’m feelin like a body builder how I pum the weights.I get the cake and if you eatin then I want a Plate. And I know you gonna give me what I wanna take.And your fake necklace I’ll spray your intestines. And make you lay next to the breakfast and lunch you ate.Its that easy with an I in my hand, I pop like a frying pan because man I’m that greasy. You trying to have a discussion I’ll spit in your grill …eww that was disgustin. I hustle till its real late until I get killed and I got to lay still in a straight place…Cowards..
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Arsen has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 10:21 PM.
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Rippin Pussies My Job Herb, Since Ya "Brain Sux"...U Just "Slob Nerds" I Keep Weapons But I Dont Need Them 2 "Help Guide" Dis Blind Terd!! Fuck Around Wit Ah Real Man, Who Splits Bones With His Bare Hands.. You Not On My Level Goddamn, Life Ends "Quick"........ & Your "Sand"! (quicksand) Disappear When My Verse Is Ova, Fucked His Pride...C It Bendin Ova? Ya Name Is "J" But Im Ja"Hova", Ya Lines Strrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrretched .................................................. .............................And Ya Ass Still "Sober"!! Personals On You I May Not Have, But Council Man Please Dont Brag Cuz I Heard About Ya "FAST LOSSES".........And I Ain Talkin Bout "Tag"! (he a ho, lose himself fast) Ya Shoulda Warned Dude, I'ma Monster...He Ain Fillin My Large Shoes By Da Way, U Couldnt Join "The Council"...So U Bitin Their Name Too? Dats 10...Da (.......) Line Is Apart Of Line 6.......Da Verse Dont Need Explanations BOOM! |
Lmao You Serious Homie?? Well Aight....Uppin 4 Votes
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Nice..Nice i liked thr rythm when will we know who who ?
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Voted For: Arsen
ohhk another battle of urs eyy Arsen.. council - your structure was complete shit, lines were stretched and alot of ur shit didnt make sence, u just talked irrelivent shit, punches were weak and wack, vocabularry needs to be improved, try and use sum multies mayne, im not meaning to be mean, but your whole verse was not worth the read... elevate.. arsen - punches hit hard, some lines were stretched but they wernt ova done, nice vocab, ya structure was fiyah compared to his.. lmao, and overall u mauled this kid, no need to explain any more... vote - Arsen |
Thanx For Votin Up Nigga....Much Appreciate.....I'll Return It If I Can
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We Need 5 Votes Niggas........Hit This Shit Up I'll Return It
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nice flow arsen that nigga bizzo is a hata
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Jea I Noticed Fam.............We Need Votes, Wuts Good
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This was feedback posted for -The Council-
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Can i Get some votes was i that bad 4 my first time
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Voted For: Arsen
ok structure you got thsi easy lol council whoa bars kid not paragraph form lol personals tie neither fo u really had any arsens crew line was all that i saw ok line but up it on the personals vocab i dont really give a fuckbut both need to work on that rhyme scheme really basic ok best lines arsen your name play biting the crew name truth lol council didnt really see any lines that i liked to be honest i think ud be a better audio head |
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