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Trajed'ee VS. Bullethole
10-15 Linez max
No feedin Drop your verse shun... 1. |
Yo my rymes are like a trivia/
they fuk ure head up like cociane from bolivia/ u aint herd of me u must be a hermit/ my rymes is tight so u better learn it/ weather or not i drop sumthin hot i always got tha flow/ lettin other mc's now that i'll bury ure dead body in the snow/ i aint puttin on no show so if u fuk wit me u better lay low/ smoke up the last of your weed/ coz im gonna plant a lyrical seed in your brain you wont forget/ my skill make other rappers regret getting into this game its a damn shame/ that i keep droppin shit making make peeps lose a little bit a credit/ ure ryme u might aswell shred it coz nefing i say will beat it so ure fake ass verse just keep it |
U got tha name Bullethole from tha way I pull it slow//
Click clack wit a sick MAC, I leave you full of holes// MC from an out of area real, shinin like diamonds, fuck a jewel Im a gem// Im B-I-G- you Lil like Kim, played out wit a dick in ya mouth spittin bout rims// My SOULdiers get live from front 2 back, and leave cats slumped wit chunks blew out they back// Feel tha funk rattle ya trunk, unsigned hype, hypin tha track// Tongue tied fights be providin tha facts of I destroy tha wack// Dirty and gritty, gots tha grimey grime// No mercy, attitude shitty, known to smack a clown from time to time// Yo sweet like Hersheys brandishin unloaded 9's// That type of shit'll have you duckin and vanishin wit ya body corroded by 9's// So trust its loaded when I got minez... cause these streets is war// Aint shit funny I'll pull back ya grin wit 4-4's// Drive bys, strays eject out windows of 4 doors...// Lookin to expose targets, I decompose faggots who perpetrate to be tha hardest// |
out of area REALM*********************************
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this one goes to bullethole his punches at the start were funni as fuk lol that hermit shit trajede up your game homie
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Uppin'
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Gavin, learn how to vote
Opening:Trajedee Wordplay:Bout Even Punches:Bullet Flow:Trajedee Structure:Trajadee Ending:Both sucked You both need to elevate big time....and Trajadee i'll sum up your drop in one sentence "I'll shoot you with my gun" V/Bullethole |
Like My Man Said
Their Endings Were Wack Bot I Think Trajed'ee Had Everthing Structure, Punches |
not trying to sway, but understand the fact that all he said is he was goin to shoot him
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bullethole
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure wasnt very good...u had some short lines, but then some stretched ones as well...not very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack on consistency...u had a few metas...no good wordplay...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals... Trajed'ee dont seperate ur lines, or put the /s at the end...both r newb tendecies...structure was ok...most of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off due to the strechness...no good metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall neither had a good structure...Trajed'ee had the slightly better flow...neither had good metas...both had wack wordplay...neither had good personals......bullethole had more connecting punches...and punches r more important to flow, so basing off of that...bullethole gets my vote... VOTE - BULLETHOLE P.S., Check in and spit in our battle, bullethole...dont forget... |
Uppin MuthaFuckaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bullethole
Yo my rymes are like a trivia/ they fuk ure head up like cociane from bolivia/ ->>Raw imma give it to ya, with no trivia ->>raw like cocaine straight from Bolivia ->>Wu Tang Clan "Da Mystery of Chessboxin" ->>dont know if u bit it or coincidence but had to point it out u aint herd of me u must be a hermit/ my rymes is tight so u better learn it/ ->>decent weather or not i drop sumthin hot i always got tha flow/ lettin other mc's now that i'll bury ure dead body in the snow/ i aint puttin on no show so if u fuk wit me u better lay low/ ->>flow is fukked and played topics smoke up the last of your weed/ ->>rhyme scheme in these next lines is fukked coz im gonna plant a lyrical seed in your brain you wont forget/ ->>decent my skill make other rappers regret getting into this game its a damn shame/ ->>weak that i keep droppin shit making make peeps lose a little bit a credit/ ->>weak ure ryme u might aswell shred it coz nefing i say will beat it so ure fake ass verse just keep it ->>weak closer Trajed'ee U got tha name Bullethole from tha way I pull it slow// Click clack wit a sick MAC, I leave you full of holes// ->>ok but gun talk is played MC from an out of area real, shinin like diamonds, fuck a jewel Im a gem// Im B-I-G- you Lil like Kim, played out wit a dick in ya mouth spittin bout rims// ->>lines are way too long and i didnt really get it My SOULdiers get live from front 2 back, and leave cats slumped wit chunks blew out they back// Feel tha funk rattle ya trunk, unsigned hype, hypin tha track// Tongue tied fights be providin tha facts of I destroy tha wack// ->>thought this line was ok Dirty and gritty, gots tha grimey grime// No mercy, attitude shitty, known to smack a clown from time to time// ->>decent Yo sweet like Hersheys brandishin unloaded 9's// That type of shit'll have you duckin and vanishin wit ya body corroded by 9's// ->>second line way stretched So trust its loaded when I got minez... cause these streets is war// Aint shit funny I'll pull back ya grin wit 4-4's// Drive bys, strays eject out windows of 4 doors...// ->>its ok Lookin to expose targets, I decompose faggots who perpetrate to be tha hardest// ->>reminded me of those closers where the beat stops and you keep going...not a bad thing just thought of that bullethole your rhyme scheme made yours hard to read...internal rhymes are fine but you have to have end rhymes or it wont work. Trajed'ee your lines are too long but at the end they got nice length. Gun-talk got annoying to. vote goes to Trajed'ee because his shit rhymed a lot better and was just all-around better. Bullethole just needs to keep elevating..no hate here though. \/both yall hit this up honestly\/ |
from wat I saw, traj is into Big Pun. get off his dick and do Ur own shit homie. let the greates ever rest in peace. any, U get my vote becouse Bullethole was kinda garbage. His rymes were atleast 95% filler and only 5% punchess. It was too basic. none of U actually came hard but I thought that Traj did a better job and had a more complex style. Fix Ur punches and structur and U'll be str8. Ur flows ok in my view. next time try some good personals when U get the onec of a life time chance of battlein a guy named bullet hole.
V/ Trajed'ee P.S. could U please return the favour wit an honest vote in a battle in my sig. any of em would do. thanks. |
Schema, thanks for pointin out he bit taht verse..completely changes my vote...get original you fuckin muff diver
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Post tha lyricz I fuckin bit.... I didnt so u cant.... Shut tha fuck up/..... UPPIN
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