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This was my reply to the battle :: Billy vs. De Niro . . .

heres the link to the battle to help my reply make more sense . . .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36932

Figured it could help some of y'all out too . . .

Quote:

Originally posted by Mind Theory
hahah

billy- "and fuck multies.......they make you sound pretty...
fatlip i appreciate the vote but this is a battle...
punchlines, metas, and wordplay is what counts"

^^TRue. . . but when you got good punchlines, metas, wordplays, AND MULTIES . . . thats when u gotta an ill verse that people are gonna have a hard time beating . . .^^^

anyways, billy obviously won, better everything . . .

Deniro, you should never underestimate anybody . . . thats why I have never been beaten cause I come my hardest againt WHOEVER it is im battling . . . whether it was SirPimpin (lol), X Ecution, or The best cat on this site (whoever that is) . . .

BIlly, nice Improvement . . .

I have a few suggestions . . .

People dont realizze how just changing around a few words in a punch can make it hit 5 times harder . . . for instance . . .

instead of - Bro.... "analyze" your rhymes.. " De Niro"/

you coulda put somethin like -

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah parylyze cats/
"De Niro" brings wack verses in "pairs" like "sequels" . . . "Analyze That"//

^^just an example^^

This is to everybody and anybody readin this . . . take the concepts u have and word it so the punch hits as hard as it can . . . cause a concept can can be a wack punch or an ill one dependin on how u structure it/

also when u have 2 lines that rhyme, put the stronger line 2nd . . .

for instance. . .

Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/
Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/

should have been . . .

Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/
Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/

it woulda hit harder . . .

Just a few helpful suggestions to anyone who's readin this . . .

MY VOTE BILLY